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Vartil-Shadowalker


I write to let my active imagination out, but I'm learning as I go.

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My name is John J. Rambo. I'm a warrior well was, I sit here in my rocking chair bleeding out I think how'd it come to this, where will it go. All I know is my fight here is done and I'll keep all of their memories alive...even if I'm not

I DO NOT OWN THE RIGHTS TO RAMBO OR MLP:FIM ALL RIGHTS GO TO RESPECTIVE OWNERS

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 67 )

As a Rambo fan I approve just fix the typos

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I'll go threw and fix them, I'm trying to come up with how I want to execute the next chapter

ok not bad, I'll keep an eye on this.

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Thank you I'm gonna hopefully have chapter 2 out in a couple days I just need to dicide what town I want it to take place in

I like the story but please get an editor

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Im new on here so I don't know anyone that could help me

Go back and proofread the chapter 2 or 3 times before posting. You'll catch alot of your mistakes then.

Keep it up. I find this very interesting

What?
They are all human weapons. You didn't even change names.

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Could you point out where you saw that i didn't see it on my double check

Now, I haven't seen the movies, but how is Rambo a "machine"?

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Just a figure of speech, or is it?...nah its just a figure of speech

Alright ill try i've had writers block and ive beem trying to think of the introduction for Artificer and a way, mostly like what race do I want him to be earth, pegasi, or unicorn, im leaning towards unicorn tbh, his childs name and race if you have any suggestions please feel free to share them

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Alright give me your ideas and I'll try implementing some im still kinda stuck on Artificer like i kind of have an idea im leaning towards him being a unicorn black smith cause this d and d youtube video gave me a really good idea for a golem that i want to implement. I've narrowed it down a bit but most of it is still confusing that and I only have my phone and because of the virus my local library is closed and i prefer writing on a laptop and my job has cut me to literally only two days a week so Im barely getting by, I'll try and have the story updated by next week if I can, I just don't want to disappoint readers and deter them from the story, I really want to do something semi original

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I'll add those things in a later chapter, along with a few other things I'm thinking of

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I'll look into cross bows but theu aren't going to be making many weapons mostly ammo, plus I'm going to have them update they're wagons in case their found and Ive gotten a few ideas of the internet for armor and wagons

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Derpy's link works for me I don't know why it isn't working for you plus I fixed Distractions link so now it should be working

Any society that would give up a little liberty to gain a little security will deserve neither and lose both.

The world is a dangerous place to live, not because of the people who are evil, but because of the people who don’t do anything about it.

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I'm glad I didn't turn you away from the story,I decided to take a different approach I wanted to bring in the princesses at some point and I figured why not make them choose peace and harmony over a few of there subjects

She is truly blind if she thinks that they will stop with a hand full of her subject

Comment posted by 3-tap deleted Aug 26th, 2020

i am a little confused is he a pony or human

"This is the M40A5, a highly modified Remington 700 hunting rifle, chambered in .308 Winchester and 7.62x51mm NATO. This model comes equipped with a custom, 1–12 twist twenty-five-inch Schneider barrel. The rifle is topped off with a Schmidt and Bender Police Marksman II 4-16x50mm on a thirty-minute-of-angle base designed to stretch the legs of the .308 round to a maximum 1,000 yards." Sharp Talon explained while handing the weapon to John.

Well... Technically NATO does not exist in Equestria and there aren't firearms.

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