My name is John J. Rambo. I'm a warrior well was, I sit here in my rocking chair bleeding out I think how'd it come to this, where will it go. All I know is my fight here is done and I'll keep all of their memories alive...even if I'm not
I DO NOT OWN THE RIGHTS TO RAMBO OR MLP:FIM ALL RIGHTS GO TO RESPECTIVE OWNERS
As a Rambo fan I approve just fix the typos
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I'll go threw and fix them, I'm trying to come up with how I want to execute the next chapter
ok not bad, I'll keep an eye on this.
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Thanks I'll try not to disappoint
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Thank you I'm gonna hopefully have chapter 2 out in a couple days I just need to dicide what town I want it to take place in
DO MORE CAPS LOCK!
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Gotcha
I like the story but please get an editor
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Im new on here so I don't know anyone that could help me
Go back and proofread the chapter 2 or 3 times before posting. You'll catch alot of your mistakes then.
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Alright thanks
Keep it up. I find this very interesting
Spelling errrrers !!!!
Asid good
What?
They are all human weapons. You didn't even change names.
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I'll double check it and fix it soon
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Could you point out where you saw that i didn't see it on my double check
Now, I haven't seen the movies, but how is Rambo a "machine"?
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Just a figure of speech, or is it?...nah its just a figure of speech
More pls and thank u
Alright ill try i've had writers block and ive beem trying to think of the introduction for Artificer and a way, mostly like what race do I want him to be earth, pegasi, or unicorn, im leaning towards unicorn tbh, his childs name and race if you have any suggestions please feel free to share them
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Alright give me your ideas and I'll try implementing some im still kinda stuck on Artificer like i kind of have an idea im leaning towards him being a unicorn black smith cause this d and d youtube video gave me a really good idea for a golem that i want to implement. I've narrowed it down a bit but most of it is still confusing that and I only have my phone and because of the virus my local library is closed and i prefer writing on a laptop and my job has cut me to literally only two days a week so Im barely getting by, I'll try and have the story updated by next week if I can, I just don't want to disappoint readers and deter them from the story, I really want to do something semi original
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fixed thank you
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I'll add those things in a later chapter, along with a few other things I'm thinking of
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I'll look into cross bows but theu aren't going to be making many weapons mostly ammo, plus I'm going to have them update they're wagons in case their found and Ive gotten a few ideas of the internet for armor and wagons
Nice
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Derpy's link works for me I don't know why it isn't working for you plus I fixed Distractions link so now it should be working
Any society that would give up a little liberty to gain a little security will deserve neither and lose both.
The world is a dangerous place to live, not because of the people who are evil, but because of the people who don’t do anything about it.
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I'm glad I didn't turn you away from the story,I decided to take a different approach I wanted to bring in the princesses at some point and I figured why not make them choose peace and harmony over a few of there subjects
She is truly blind if she thinks that they will stop with a hand full of her subject
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Why u cancel this storie?
i am a little confused is he a pony or human
Well... Technically NATO does not exist in Equestria and there aren't firearms.