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Conner lost his home. He lost his parents. He almost lost his life. The last thing he sees is Alex Mercer before blacking out. When he wakes up Alex is there waiting for him to wake up. He doesn’t ask him to join but he asks him to hide it. He did until James Heller finds him and convinced him not to kill him. The next day the school is pumped with bloodtox and Conner is gone. He wakes up in a school in front of a white object. Can he live like he wants or will he be found out.
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Ask a question an ill try to answer.
She gets to raise a Evolve she is the first to raise an a evolve
And l did not put an ed at the end of evolve
You don’t see too many prototype fan fic ever with anthro
So keep it up
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Thank you for the support
I am loving this story, keep up the good work.
The only thing I would suggest is to run it through a spell check, because I noticed some misprints.
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Sorry most words I want to us won’t work with spell check plus I’m doing this on my phone
You did this on phone?
You're a Legend.
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Thanks I would do this on a computer if I had one. It’s hard to spell for me and spellcheck doesn’t always work. So thanks for the support.
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Yeah buddy
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Yes
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Is it tiring? Writing only tires me when I have to research for my storys. And I don't know what I was supposed to say when you said yes... so... I said this!
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No writing what you know I did this because I knew so much and added a few changes to the original to help with the story. Subtle changes to the original game or movie to help the story.
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Someone wants to be Hokage
I only have one question is there gonna be a sequel
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Fuck ya I only ran out of ideas because I planned too far a head.
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My tip plan only a chapter ahead of the one your writing
Your fic is poorly worked on, I'll put the things you need to work on/improve in a list
1. Details
2. Describing
3. Too cheesy
4. Too Emotional
5. Grammer
Excuse me sir would you mind if you stopped Celestia from showing ponies his Memories because it's getting Cringe -_-
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Honestly fair, I can't even read this without cringing. I use it as a reminder of where I started.
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Not gonna lie by just reading your newest story I can sense from a mile away that you've improved a lot
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Thanks man, to be honest, I used this as a means of learning proper grammar and spelling since it was what I struggled with in school. Now it's honestly one of my favorite hobbies that I hope I can actually turn into a job.
I know I'm still struggling in a few aspects, but I'm confident I can improve further. I appreciate the criticism and nice comments; because it makes me want to do better and give more to the community that's helped me more than anyone could ever know.
I hope to see more criticism and nice comments from you, my guy. Or not, I don't know what you got going on your life and I don't want to be in it's way.
May good karma come to you!