Shorty after his long overdue death at the hands of Seras Victoria, The great Captain finds himself in a strange new land that the inhabitance calls Equestria. Freed from his master and armed with his two long barreled pistols, The Captain has a new mission now: Finding a new purpose.
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I've been thinking about writing my own fanfic for a while now and I thought, why the hell not. I Hope I don't disappoint too much. Also I'm not gonna be having a lot of ponies cursing all over the place, not really my style and preference.
Also the Crossover is Hellsing:Ultimate
Chapters (5)
I can't believe I accidently liked my own story and there is no way to undo it. People are so gonna think i'm immature
well seems good when a author likes their own work
Its got potential but the writing style needs some work. Not that there is a lot of errors in grammar.
An idea of altercations. Really scope up the fear of the Nazi werewolf.
6982637 are you giving me permission to copy and paste that to my story?
6982849 oh sure! Feel free to go ahead.
Yeah... you don't mess with The Captain...
Can someone tell me the crossover, I don't think I've heard of the series this "Captain" is from?
6988294 Hellsing Ultimate
6988294 I should probably put what the crossover is in the description so people won't be confused.
6988929 Ah thanks
6989497 no problem
Might want to get an editor
more plz
Get to the last chapter at the end I utter this sentence and I quote "fuck I want more", I wonder if he is employed by the princesses I think it could make a good bit of dark humor and what not maybe he accidently starts a war with the griffins or maybe they were just looking for a reason for war and thought that he was a secret weapon of equestria
7103721 that gave some interesting idea's for future chapters.
Is it finished, cause what's with the "I at the end?
7268648
"I
don't know"
So... what happened next?
7268648 i screwed up
Think you mean his vision.
What will happen next? How will he communicate with the princess? Will he be fighting some powerful evil being in the future? I can't wait to see what happens next.
7457723 my vocabulary needs some work
First also keep up the good work.
good job
I almost forgot about this story. I like how its back in action.
7897380 i'm gonna try to get one out at least every week, all i have to do is reread my own story i downright forgot where we were
This reminds me of the excellent https://www.fimfiction.net/story/66115/equestrian-blitz
7898166 Well hopefully i can keep this story alive.
Please keep this going, The Captain is a rather fascinating character and I'd love to see more.
More i demand more!
7898393 When will the new chapter be?
7899145 Agreed
7898393 I want more chapters
Reasons
Reason 1 Captain fan
Reason 2 hellsing ultimate fan
And final reason is i like this story its awesome and good
To author: He doesn't have an official name but some fans call him Hans Gunsche. Or The Captain as he's known on the anime.
Also I find it weird that you don't spell his words like he is speaking... Or in the most part thinking in a German accent.
This is awesome!
Kill everything
Make more please
Make more please
Update please
Come on update this story is good please 🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻
New chapters ?????