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Hopefullygoodgrammar


"I'm Off!" said the Madman!!

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She was dead.

Samiel had killed her, violated her soul and made her into a weapon to be used against her allies.

She had been destroyed.

And yet....

She awakens in a colorful land, under the care of a strange creature who shows her the first real kindness that she's received since her time in Millennium.

But her traumatic death and the time that she's had to truly think about her actions are weighing on her spirit, dragging her down into despair.

Can she find redemption?

I don't own MLP or Hellsing Ultimate.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 108 )

First off....
Don't be deterred by the dislikes.

I like this...a redemption.

Just know that I will be watching with profound interest. :unsuresweetie:

4660858 Thank you very much for your support and I hope that you like where it leads.... though I doubt that it will be a very long story.

I like it.

4660912 you made a hellsing fic about van winkle :rainbowkiss:

there needs to be more Hellsing fics

4660942 I might do a sequel with Schrodinger if I feel like it and this does well.

You sir are now my new best friend. This is the first Hellsing crossover i've seen with Rip who happens to be my all time favorite Hellsing character next to Anderson, shame she didn't get much screen time they could have done so much with her. The redemption idea is brilliant and if anyone can help her along that road its Fluttershy. Keep up the good work ,I'll be watching :pinkiecrazy:

4661106 Thank you so much, You've made my day better :raritystarry:

4661109 And you made it awesome by writing this :twilightsmile: i love rip and fluttershy i think they're both cuter than a box of kittens. some how you managed to get some feels going in my own blackened heart. and you are most welcome for the fav, you earned it. :pinkiehappy:

4661170 Awwwww ()#####() thank you, I hope to make the feels flow next chapter :pinkiesmile:

Hmmm...Would Rip still be a vampire?

4661295 Yes. But I won't focus on that too much, considering vampires in Hellsing seem to be a bit... underdeveloped.

4661327 I was more thinking of the whole need for blood thing...

4661428 I'm not sure if they need blood in the series, and I'll ignore it if they do... I just really don't like the whole "I must have blood every five seconds or I'll die" stuff... It kinda weighs the plot down i my eyes.

errrrrrrrn......the......FEELS!!:pinkiegasp:

4661470 Well, I just remember Seras needed blood (At least every so often) or she began getting weaker and weaker, or something like that.

4661470
Ceras is created by Alucard and eats souls. Donor blood was only a substitute and a weak one, and she overgrown this stage. Rip is artificial vampire, but AFAIK the process utilized by Millenium is derived from Mina, who was turned into vampire by Alucard. This probably gives her same needs. The location of Millenium in Latin America, known for regular revolutions, agrees with it, though does not prove directly.
Given that, I'd say that Rip needed blood or, preferably, souls when she was a vampire under Millenium in Hellsing universe and probably used to it, but make it only an option and not a requirement in Equestria. Bonus points for fueling her special powers by blood/souls.

4662565 I see.... but I'm not going to really focus on that for a good deal of the story. Sorry :applecry:

Well, I'm hooked. I seen some Hellsing crossovers here before, but never with any of the villains.
Giving Rip a redemption story is also a neat twist, and from the quality of your writing I can expect great things. :pinkiehappy:

MORE!:pinkiecrazy:

4663525 Thank you so much, I'm so glad that you like it AND you like my writing style :raritystarry:

I think I'll be able to give you another chapter tonight, but it is a Fluttershy chapter, CH3 will have Rip again.

OOooh this is going to be a GRAND fubar of contact with Twilight, Queen of no tack, Empress of No Socal tact, and princess of eggheads

4664111 Yup. :pinkiehappy:

The mention of the dungeon....foreshadowing, anyone?

No idea what He'll sing is but I don't give a Shoit (for comic affect) I can't wait for the next chapter.

Two updates in a day? Nice, now i feel bad its been a week and I still haven't gotten around to finishing the next chapter of the story I'm working on. Stupid distracting ponies and their stories :twilightsheepish:

4664383 I'm very glad that you like this story, I'm not sure that I'll have the next chapter up tomorrow, but I think that I'll have the next chapter of Seeing Monsters out tomorrow night. Maybe you'd like to read that, or my other stuff?

4664455 I shall look into them, I have been on a feels binge today and perhaps taking a look into the abyss will allow me to regain some of lost reputation as The Mad Mare. Its either that or listen to my brother continue to laugh at me for bawling like a little filly at all the bittersweet TwiDash Stories i had saved up in my read later list :applecry:

4664528 I think you'd like Seeing Monsters and Regenerator 228 They are my highest-rated stories and Regenerator 228's been featured once or twice.

"Is that you, my love?" is also one that I wrote, and it's an Amnesia: Justine crossover.

4664538 To be honest I don't know a whole lot about the Amnesia series, but i will check out the others. If i may be so bold would you like to check out the vampire story i am working on? Feel free to turn this down of course, but if you like dark humor and Dance in the Vampire bund style vampires it may be to your liking. Either way i shall dive right into Seeing monsters, I do so love a good Lovecraftian horror :pinkiecrazy:

4664605 To be honest, I'm not the biggest vampire fan, at least... I don;t like romantic, human-y vampires, I like the kind in Fright Night, The Strain, Blade 2, Dracula and Hellsing, I've never seen Dance of the Vampire Bund either.

But I will look at your story :twilightsmile:

keep it up, it just need to be a little longer.

4683780 It'll be plenty long, don't worry :pinkiesmile:

Ah, I simply love Rip, they gave her such a gorgeues voice in the OVA. X3
Plus, she is based on "der Freischütz", which is a classic per se.
Its nice to see her get some attention in a redemption story. Im eagerly awaiting more.=^-^=

Interesting story. But with her name rather then dieing and resurrecting in another world it would be more fitting for her to sleep till the world remade itself into equestria. You know "Rip Van Winkle" style for her namesake Rip Van Winkle who slept in a cane magically drunk for 20 years.

4684023 That's interesting, but I don't really go for the whole "Equestria was Us." stuff, sorry.

4684085
I'm not that big of a fan of it as well, but I found it interesting because of whom Rip is named after.

4684107 Yeah... but I won't rewrite this. I didn't even expect it to grow into a full story.

4684139
Oh, I was not even suggesting anything about rewriting, the story is nice as it is, just wanted to make an observation about the namesake.

4684149 Oh... okay... sorry for freaking out :twilightblush:

...Twilight was squee-ing at the end, wasn't she?

4684249 I'll take that as a "yes". :)

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