A nuke has been set off in Duncan's castle. No one knows who set it off, but what everyone does know is that a strange portal has opened up where Blackrock used to be. Zoeya, being the curious cyborg she is decides to jump in. Rythian, and Teep, being the kinda adopted big brothers they are, jump in after her. The tomfoolery that ensue will be almost catastrophic...but not quite.
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To any one who has a problem, it's my first fic...ever. So be gentle.
This has some potential, but I think what you need is an editor. I'd be happy to do such a thing for you, if you'd like.
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Let me know if you;d like me to help!
Until next time...
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2887276 That...would be really helpful.
But I just made this account and have no idea how this works. If you show me i'll be thrilled to have you! For your troubles enjoy a moustache 
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It's no trouble at all, amigo. I like helping people!
So, down to brass tacks. What are you having trouble with?
2887528 pm me
Looks interesting, but what is this a crossover with?
2887639 The Blackrock chronicle by Yogscast Rythian
Its beast
2887733 I'm pretty sure everyone is already 'chill'... I see no hateful comments after all.
I liked this story for the title itself and the wtf factor
Personally, I love blackrock chronicles and I'm very happy I found this fic
I can't wait to see what happens with twilight and rythian and how twilight reacts to thaumic theory and equivalent exchange (although it doesn't work in minecraft it might work in equestria) Also looking forward to zoey meeting rarity. Oh and I hope they move into the castle in the first and second episode, oh and rythian and Luna I think are gonna get along, oh and teep and spike, i can imagine a sort of a big bro relationship there, altogether, I'm gonna enjoy this story.
2891518 I will have Rythian teach Twilight thaumatic theory but equavilent exchange...I'll research more into it. Anyway: moving into the castle is a good idea... if it wern't for the small fact that it's amazingly cliche
so no I got different plans. also i'm doing a twist for Teep. Only me and the editor will know of it until tuesday european time. Oh and somthin between zoey and one of the mane 6. not telling which one but you'll be smart enough to figure it out when it comes. Enjoy a moustache for your troubles 
pleas make more.
New chapters every Tuesday for all of you
I NEED AN PROOF REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEADEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEER!
so this can be better!
Enjoy!
Oh and this is Where the crossover comes from.
YAY!
Keep up the work
well so far I have
for this story
There was THREE nukes under Blackrock Stronghold, not two.
2896182 Yeah I make mistake.
I go fix it.
Oh and alicorn OC's Are stupid.
2896213 I know. I made it ages ago when I first joined because I needed an avatar. I'm going get round to changing it eventually when I get the art done. Drawing ponies is more difficult than you would think.
'arm because of two nukes'
Missed that one dude :P
Auto fav for being a story about Shakespeare in Jurassic Park.
Okay, I have read this now, and I am in love with it. And if you need a pre-reader for grammar help, I'd be happy to do so. I'm like the leader of the Grammar Nazis. I'm Grammar Hitler.
I was just watching the blackrock chronicles while writing my fanfic and I found this interesting.
Never seen a yogscast RYTHIN crossover ( I have seen a Lewis and simon crossover) Can't wait for the next update
2904143 Rythian, get it right!
Calm down Pinkie it was just a mistake.
Ohhhhhhh. Sorry!
So they all came I think........I'm okay with this....I'm not sure. still good story can't wait for more!
2949003 What? No!
More like they they got insane levels of high.
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Which one is the worst?.....
2949406 ........I don't know.......
seriously though I don't. 
Um, I'd like to point out that you never sent this to me. Or maybe you did but I didn't receive it. Either way I didn't get to proof-read it. So I don't quite deserve the title of proof-reader. Not yet at any rate.
Pinkie, god damnit. We know you can break the Fourth Wall, but pulling a friggin' CELLPHONE out is breaking the multiverse! And that's supposed to be my job!
If that's how fights are done in this fic, I gotta get in on this. I have a wide arsenal of moves that could lead to some very... creative Fatalities.
Sire? I think the fights are nonlethal.
Nonlethal? Crap... While severely diminished, my nonlethal repertoire is still quite expansive, so I guess my point still stands.
PINKIE, CALM DOWN AND HAVE A SUPER BUU
2959849 GET YO ALICORN BULLSHIT OUTTA HERE!!
BUU YAH!
BUU YAH!
So, let's see what happens after the flash, eh? Besides, that kind of an explosion has to have done some damage to the physical world!
Okay, what's taking so long with Chapter 3? You could just play the flux explosion as there being suddenly hundreds of cubic meters worth of wisps in the area. That would also be a good excuse to have them stop fighting each other as they are attacked by the several hundred wisps in the area.
3004482 Dude, you don't rush work.
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Sorry, I'm just excite to see what the heck happens. And, of course, Rythian and Twilight Sparkle's reactions to it. I mean, come on, it's a new magical anomaly that neither Rythian nor Twilight Sparkle have ever encountered before!
3004500 The reason the chapter is taking so long is I was away on holiday and his computer blew up so we haven't had much time to work on it.
To those who are worried about the stories continuation let me clarify some things. I'm still not dead, and I'm gonna have to blame this wait on ADHD. This will definitely continue. It'll just take a really long time.
3082436 Alright can't wait to see the next chater
Also whats ADHD????
3088323 Attention Deficit Hyperactivity Disorder.
3088388 Oh, (voice changes into doctor whooves's) Oh dear.
Well hope it won't stop you making this story, (voice changes into Doctor whooves's again) good luck chap:)
If an update is ever possible please make it happen
More please.
continue this!
I can't wait for more! This such a fun story!
A bit of advice: keep the 4th wall intact, the story will look more professional that way.
Very good nonetheless.
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What the guy below me said.