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CasperSantiq


I am licensed to kill... literature.

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Argen Lupus finds himself in the land of Equestria shortly after the events of Twilights' coronation, though things never seem to go his way, Werewolf hunters are on his trail once again, though they seem paltry compared to the Redhoods that once sought to destroy him. now he finds himself at the mercy of a goddess he thought he lived for.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 9 )

To be fair... Applejack deserved what she got. Just because Agren assumed that Big Mac was her husband, she told Big Mac to hurt him? That doesn't seem very fair. Also a little ooc for Mac to attack just because Applejack said so.

This intrigued me.
Though, the mane 6 seems to deviate from their established canon characters and character developments by quite a large margin.
Everything also happened in a strangely cropped way. It's like uneven cut papers edges in term of flow.

7711091 I'm kinda bad with story flow, but i can only get better! I just hope i can get good enough to go back eventually and edit the tartarus out of all my stories.

7662179 Do you hate how your comment didn't get a response?

I don't know what the fuck is happening. :pinkiecrazy:

7798194 After being ejected from the castle, Argen blows his top, and Bren wakes up on a cloud. From there we have a rather well performed swan dive into a cart holding something, with a side of impailment for argen, which possibly snaps him from that. Followed by Bren thinking he sees a dead girl.

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