Hmm, Chaos is a sweet thing. I love the panic in people when things don't go to plan. That is why I shall never become victim to those who think order is the natural law
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This needs MOAR explosions!
The story is starting out great, can’t wait for more chapters.
Grate story a few spelling mistakes but the story makes up for it.
Please continue
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If Alex Forman was voiced, what would he sound like?
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I haven't thought of that.
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Plus. It is a she. I said it in the chapter.
love the picture
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when I read her I hear a mix of Jacqui Briggs and Sonya Blade. with a hint of Fluttershy.
Also, I enjoy how this is coming out so far.
I know this needs editing. I really don’t care, because I know it doesn’t need all of that if the story is going to be cool. I will try to fix things myself, but in reality I just don't feel like getting the editor.
I really do love all the likes and tips. This is my first story that is doing this good!
I love you guys and I will make sure to impress you all with the new chapters coming soon.
Love that artwork at the end! Story's got my attention.
interesting story so far, keep it up.
Not a bad start
Several grammatical errors, but Im just glad theres another active titanfall horsefic
Keep up the good work friendo
Also, the pre-patch multiplayer skin for gates was just a reskinned Cooper, they changed it to accurately match how she looks in the campaign
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I know. I was actually trying to decide on either the new gates look or the old one. I found the old one more like an old and real pilot instead of a sexy hooker which is the new one.
i think im in love
good work, a few points that had missing words, but I can appoint that to mind before matter.
all in all good work.
I've got some bad news peeps. I will be going to a summer camp, so I will not be able to write chapters at a frequent level like I have been doing. I am still looking for anyone who wants to be part of my story. Remember to email me if interested with all your character facts and stuff. The selection will end by this Saturday. I cant wait to see you guys again.
Until Then.
PEACE!
im happy to be a part of this story, and another great chapter. keep it up, and happy Independence Day! on a side note, FD is finally coming back! (99% sure) they said on the official patch notes page for Monarch's Reign update that July's update will include the return of a much requested fan favorite gamemode, and if it isnt FD ill be VERY surprised, so thats something to look forward to.
Lets bting bring the pain EX!
Not gonna lie, i thought Alex was a guy, since the name Alex is usually associated with males, even thought its a name for both genders
Hey uhm,Where can I contact the author? Just asking. Maybe I will be another part for you too.
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Near the nickname there is a square with "mail" written in. So you can contact the author
Yessssssss! this story is still alive! By now I had lost hope of updating this story and I thought you had abandoned it, but I'm glad I was wrong. However great chapter I can not wait to read the next chapters!
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Yea, I was close to stopping until I sat infront of my computer and saw what was on my favorites tab. I needed some time from my school work to do this. Thank you for not completely giving up on me. I will try to write every weekend since school is starting to low down.
I saw a couple spelling errors, but nothing too major. other than that, good work, keep it up! it's great to see this story alive again!
I need more!
Really interesting story please continue
Woo! new chapter! i was worried this story had died. glad to see i was wrong! keep it up! on a side note, im no writer at all, but dont feel rushed because it's been awhile since an update. I'm willing to wait for a bit for a better chapter rather than a rushed one. take care of you're school stuffs first. if you end up with you're hands full during spring break, oh well, we can wait. after all, there's plenty of time during summer break.
I am always happy to see a new chapter in this story. Great job, I really liked this chapter!
Congratulations for this fantastic chapter! I do not regret having put this story among my favorites! I can not wait to read the next chapters!
Woo! fuck the IMC!
I'm pretty sure drill sarges around the would give a grilling for this, wasting food rations in an unknown area, with an unknown populus, with rescue not guaranteed
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Ik, its a funny reference to Bo3 when Hendrickson ate that chocolate bar and threw it away. I am aware how dumb it is to waste something like that.
It is still alive! And Jax made his debut! How beautiful! I'm happy to see that history is not dead. I liked this chapter a lot, I can not wait to read the next!
Ooooh. Love interest with my Character. Fancy!
Woo! New chapter!
Yes!! A new chapter! Excellent work! I can not wait to see how the training will continue and above all to see what happened to the rest of the team
Awesome chapter, you are doing an amazing job. I can't wait to read the next one.
Nice backstory. Simple and to the point for my dude there!
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OK! *shoots a teleport dart to transport you to the world of molestia (blog version)* HAVE FUN WITH MOLLY
Oh nice an update! I can't wait to see how this all comes back to bite the IMC in the ass...
Protocol 1: link to pilot.
Protocol 2: uphold mission objective.
Protocol 3: protect the pilot.
You mean. You didnt see the giant 2m pole mines with bright yellow lasers?
another chapter plz also that ending is prob gona have her having a fear of sex now
Why isn't there a dark tag?