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TheMultiBrony21
Hi, I love making fan-fics, listening to good music, and Derpy Hooves.
TheMultiBrony21
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A little Rush but I'm still a little interested. I hope for more.
Interesting premise, but way too rushed for me.
Story edited. I appreciate positive and helpful criticism as it helps me make my stories better. So if there is something I need to fix, be sure to tell me what it is and how to fix it. Thank you!
2/4 comments deleted = somethings up. Im removing this from my read later.
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I removed those comments because they were harsh and didn't provide me with any help on how to make this better.
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That's not any better. Good luck to you, and all, I'll leave a like.
Much better. I'll leave a like.
Bro no description in the sex scenes not just that super rushed
You didn't exactly make me feel the emotions of the characters it's not going deep enough into the way they think so it's hard to picture it
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Uh... No.
But I guess it could be.... I'm thinking of just deleting these stories and just do the HiE I wanted to do that does involve a portal but isn't a series of fanfics.
Well if he is a coward then why the hell would he want to go back to earth?
Did you uhh... spell your own name wrong? You also kinda spoiled the entire chapter in the title. And spelled your name wrong in the title.
This is bullshit. He walked out with his wife, he could have left but he went back in.
This is retarded. He walked all the way from one castle to another, talks to Celestia, goes to a medical ward for his wife, then is like "Oh yeah I got stabbed in the heart, I'm gonna die soon."
How the fuck would they know that? Didn't she get raped and shit? Couldn't that be one of the rapist's kids? Especially since Gabriel is a different species?
This is also retarded and not how child birth works. It's not just "Alright time to have another kid. Come on outta there little one. Oh fuck, hold up I gotta die real quick."
What a shit legacy.