Four Alicorns sat around the table. The youngest one sat flipping through a stack of papers and writing down notes and numbers on a notepad. The other three sat quietly and waited for her to finish.
"Alright." Twilight Sparkle said, setting down her pen. "As you know, as part of my royal duties, Celestia so graciously put me in charge of all the budget work. And thanks to that wonderfully thought out decision, i've discovered a few things. Let's start with you, Celestia."
"What ever are you talking about, Twilight? I gave you an important position, and I spend my portion of the budget carefully." Celestia said, a bored look on her face.
"Right, because you put so much thought into purchasing a golden tiolet to go inside your golden toilet. And what about that gem encrusted throne carried around by those foreign stallions? Bet you were up for days trying to decide on such an important decision."
"She got you there, aunty." Cadance said, trying to hide her smirk. Celestia gave her an angry glare but said nothing.
"Oh, Cadance, here's your cut of the budget, better than Celestia's, I'll give you that, with fewer personal purchases, and I like that you put a good portion of your personal funds toward inproving the Crystal Empire, but do you really need that many bedroom related toys for you and Shining Armor? I don't even want to think about that."
"Kinky." Luna said, pearing over Twilight's shoulder to read off the list. "I see you took my advice on the fuzzy hoofcuffs." Twilight rolled her eyes.
"Luna, you are by far the most impressive. Glad to see you are donating over a million bits toward charity with each of your allowances, that's almost 25 percent."
"Well, I do my best to help the country."
"And the other 75 percent was spent on comic books, video games, and cartoons."
"ITS MANGA AND ANIME!" Luna yelled. "There's a difference!"
"Whatever." Twilight said. "Now, are we going to improve our spending to get things that actually matter?"
"Yes, Twilight." The others said.
"Good. Meeting adjured." Twilight said, making her way out of the room.
"So should I cancel that order on the gold toilet to go inside the gold toilet inside the gold toilet then?" Celestia said, tapping her hooves together nervously.
"WHY DO YOU NEED SO MANY GOLDEN TOILETS?" Twilight yelled from down the hall.
Toiletception.
Whatever you do, don't bring up the bidet in the bidet in the bidet in the bidet in the bidet - all of them solid platinum.
Alicorn anatomy is weird... dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Mr_Cake.png
I should really make a list of this stuff.
--Sollace
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"Adjured" should be "adjourned." Also, I'm noticing a couple misspellings, namely "tiolet." I have noticed that you have a couple errors of this ilk in many of your stories.
I do enjoy reading these little snippets, but errors are much more problematic when the stories are under five hundred words. The reader is more likely to remember them, negatively impacting their view of the story, and indeed the writer as well.
I would recommend letting someone just read through and fix those little errors for you, to help with that.
3665967 I fix errors when people point them out, and I personally think that the errors add a little personality to the writing. They may stick out to you, but I really am not losing sleep over them. Thank you for pointing them out, however, and they will be fixed.
As for the prereader thing: no. This is my work and I do it the way I do it. I've thought about it before and have even discussed it in the comments before, but i've decided not to get a prereader.
Hope that doesn't mean you'll stop reading them, but I mostly just write these for myself.
*looks out window* However did my respect for Princess Luna get out there?
Nicely done. It was a bit predicable, but still quite entertaining.
3671435 That's the fandom for you, and the internet hivemind. Luna will always be a gamer nerd at heart.