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With each sound, another hay bale in the field below burst into flames. They were scattered around seemingly randomly, but there was a purpose to the position. Some were behind hastily constructed walls, some out in the open, some obscured behind tall grass. The sounds continued, and soon the whole field was burning brightly.
Lighting Dust laughed from her perch on top of a storm cloud. The heat from below warmed her heart and the smoke cleared her lungs. She felt incredible, unstoppable, and totally invincible. Her dilated pupils scanned the scene below within her bloodshot eyes, her yellow teeth shone through her crooked smile. Her mane was horrible and her filthy coat shown through the tattered remains of her cadet flight suit, but she didn't care.
She would have her revenge. After all, Rainbow Dash may be fast...
But nothing is as fast as lightning.
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Actuallt lightning dust, I think she is faster then lightning, considering she was faster then you and all...
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Well, considering she had completely gone bonkers and is willing to destroy everything in her path to get back at Dash, I think her perspective may be a tad bit skewed...
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Yes...a tad. because a person who is a bit bonkers will be dirty, have yellow teeth and still wairing a cadet uniform that is teared. I think she is more then a bit bonkers.
3033818
you're right... how about "Downright psycotic"?
3033898
No, she is not cupcakes insane.
I must compliment your skill to write small stories like these on an almost daily basis. I really like these stories, although some ideas could use some more explanations, like with "Hidden Agendas". I was mostly confused by the end, though this is a very minor complaint. Is it hard to come up with ideas for this and to have a 500 word limit?
3033907 Sometimes. Most of these stories I just came up with randomly, but couldn't figure out how to work it into a regular sized story. Some I could if I wanted to, like with "Hidden Agendas" but I had to cut out most of the potential in order to make the 500 word limit that I set. (And I set the limit because I have a tendency to ramble) Most of these are just me getting an idea written down before I lose it and just practicing my writing. I'm glad you're enjoying it though, Seeing people enjoying my stuff always makes me feel good inside.
3033905 So, setting a field on fire as target practice for when you attack your rival witth lightning isn't insane?
3034140
She isn't planning on turning her into cupcakes, so she is not pinkamena insane, but still insane
3034149 Ah, I understand. My mistake for not knowing the difference between cupcakes insane and regular insane.
...And then Discord came and covered everything with snow.
3035894 alright... why not?
3033818 She could be homeless; would explain all of that.
And really, are we not all just a lil' crazy in da coconut?
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Ya put da lime in da coconut and ya drink it all up...
Too bad, Lightning. Cause Rainbow Dash can really move. And she's got an attitude.
One could say she's the Fastest Thing Alive!
4273057 Good thing starships aren't alive then!
Sorry Lightning, but you had your time.
Who can do the Sonic Rainboom? Not you!
You got no chance, sorry (not really).