I give you a like and a fav for effort. I can tell you actually put some effort into this as its better than some I've seen written by people who really just don't give a fuck. I wish you the best my friend.

6287900 Thank you.

Epic i like this story

7580034 Yeah, I agree. Not my most 'proudest' thing I ever written, to be honest. I'm going to do a lot more research and taking notes with the sequel and maybe edit this story as time passes, but I'm a little busy at the moment so not anytime soon.

Thanks for the reminder.

what is fluttershys secret I have read through a bit of this and not found it yet

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Honestly I can't remember her secrete until I read it through.

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when I read the short description I thought she was cheating on him or something