Fluttershy has a little secret keeping it from her special somepony, or should I say special somebody.
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where is Kat going to tell him that they are related?
4363543 In time, my good friend... in... time...
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Well at least the bomb of having 2 wife's pass, and Kat really is cool if she is ok with his brother having 2 wife's
4363585 I feel Kat should be more upset with Rainbow Dash, than what she is. Because getting bucked to the head can lead to serious health/ physical issues and even death.
Also, she adapts/ is accepting that ponies and humans can mate in this Equestria and therefore interbreed. While I wouldn't have a problem with her being supportive of Winter's family and resulting progeny, I think it should involve a more gradual process to arrive to the point of acceptance. Kind of like the 5 stages of grief. Each stage requires a certain amount of time to work through that stage before they're able to progress to the next stage.
So yeah, just some things to keep in mind, should you ever rewrite/ revise this, as well as for any future chapters. That said, don't get discourage, as I come back every so often to read these stories of yours.