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Arriving in Equestria at age ten and having a few friends is great but after seven years here you've been constantly badgered into talk to someone other then yourself. You're sent to Ponyville to meet ponies that can actually tolerate you and even want your friendship.
This is a different Dante and not one from Vices and Virtues and yes I like the name Dante it has a certain ring to it.
Oh and title is a song from Panic! At the disco.
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not bad
This story is good, but it could be a smoother read, just by putting more punctuation marks in. The lack of punctuation marks makes the reader feel as if the author and the characters don't breathe regularly. But I can't wait to r3ad the next chapter!
This piques my interests... I'll shall follow this majestic piece of literature.
However, I recommend editing and a sense for lengthening the scenarios for an enhanced experience. All in all, the idea is exceptionally grand - in a given sense.
Good luck to you, my friend. If you require assistance in any shape or form, I'll be here for support.
3794279 I would very much love any assistance you may provide.
3794291 Entiendo; a la mejor de las suertes para usted! ( I understand; to the best of luck for you!)
3793778 one of their best.
Vices and Virtues=natural Dante.
Wolf Among sheep=evil Dante.
So in this story, he is good natured Dante?
3934160 more of a depressed Dante who turns happy. And is judged constantly by ponies who think he doesn't belong.
pretty damn good
well the char is semi me off some places but is a good story so far hoppin for more and Why havent i found a viking story yet that is good
Lmao Twilight got friendzoned
Nice story so far. But don't be afraid to use simpler statements. You're starting to use words a little incorrectly, and some other words can be omitted altogether.
What deal really?
What are with his eyes? Are they a Deep Red or something? Also, who's the Mare with the Two-Toned Red Mane?
4017065 I think she was talking about her telling her friends he's not a monster and I guess his end of it was to tell her what a human was.