Cole Macgrath: The Demon of Empire City turned to the Hero of New Marais.
Now he's gone....OR IS HE?!?!
After receiveing the news that his cousin is dead, Alex Kalen believes all hope is lost. Then one day, Cole returns, very much alive. He sees that Alex is one of the few conduit survivers, and gives him the powers he wants.
Unfourtunetly, Alex uses one of his abilities in a foolish way, sending Cole, Alex's brother Jake, and himself to an unknown location.
How will Equestria cope with two superpowered conduits and a human that was able to construct a working lightsaber?
And what of the threat that haunts Alex's dreams every night in Equestria that goes by one name. A creature capable of crafting entire worlds, cloning every individual into a shadow copy, and is hellbent on revenge against God himself.
His name is......The Forge.
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Not even a whisper.
4858166 Ow.
Hmm The thing with hydra and then Luna seemed a bit out place maybe but if you want a grammar I'm not him I can help with wordplay and spelling because that what I'm best at. Don't be afraid to ask for help if you need it.
4861075 The whole reason why this story existed was for me to get my feet wet in fan-fiction writing. It's highly unlikely that I'm going to continue this, but we'll see what happens.
Kessler was not inherently evil and did save million of lives if by dark means I've also realize that since it based heavily on religion be aware some of those religion types might give you trouble Instead of just saying god maybe say god <put clever name here> so you can make your own tales surrounding him that's what I would do if I was going to have a god just saying but I like the twist with Kessler I was honestly not expecting it.
4861312 Like I said before in my previous comment, this was a test-fic that was too massive for me to accomplish on my own time. Now I'm working on a crossover with Assassin's Creed IV: Black Flag, and also my own series set in the League of Humans Acting Heroic.
I know that there are problems with this story, but I cannot and will not fix them, simply because I have given up on it.
4861150 I'll be glad to help also zeke