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It was fine until the day came along. Luna seceded from The Solar Empire and plunged Equestria into an all out civil war.... His friends took their sides... and left Spike behind.

//A little story for people, based on "Sabotage Valkyrie" by *The-Orator on DA. Probably just a short fic, nothing too major.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 14 )

I'm interested to see where this goes... :duck:

I am too. This was a touching and sweet chapter with everyone giving Spike a very happy and good birthday. Only this is going to turn out terrible, I can feel it. :fluttercry: And turn out terrible for poor Spike. :pinkiesad2:

hmm so fluttershy, lyra, pinkie and sweetie belle all took celestias side

WoW! I feel so bad for Spike. One year later on his birthday his friends are no longer together, and the one he does have with him Pinkie Pie, Fluttershy, and Sweetie Belle seem like they don't even want to bother with him at all. At least Lyra and Mrs. Cake was nice to him at least. Oh, and Twilight saying that stuff to him when she left on the carriage, that ws truly disgusting and heartbreaking. I hope if he does ever see her and the others again, they would feel terrible about what they have done, leaving poor Spike behind, and I hope Twilight feels an earthquake of guilt of the stuff she said to him. I call Twilight and the other ones Traitors!:flutterrage:

2500144 No. Sweetie, Fluttershy, Lyra, and Bon-Bon are a part of the Peace Corps.

A courageous young man Spike is. I just hope if he is reunited with Twilight and the others they won't be mean or cruel to him, especially Twilight. I can still remember what she said to him in the last chapter. But if Spike feels this is the right choice, I am rooting for him, and I hope he stays safe.:fluttercry:

I wonder how Applejack is going to react with those four coming, especially with Spike wanting to go to Canterlot. :twilightoops:

I was a bit scared with the Pinkie scene. :pinkiecrazy:, but she was sweet giving Spike a kiss on the cheek. :pinkiehappy: Uh..oh, and it seems like that either Applejack or Big Mac might have shot off the shotgun. :pinkiegasp:

:facehoof: Uh...about Zecora...you know she is a zebra and not a real woman, right?
Besides that, great chapter. I am really wanting to know what happens next!

2613973 Uh... What? :rainbowhuh: Sorry... But I don't understand what you're talking about... Different races of ponies are like different types of Ethnic origin... Not to sound racist but... Zebras would be like Africans, thus if they were human, they would have a darker shade of skin because of how she speaks gives her that kind of, voodoo queen type feel... Again... Not to be racist.... :twilightsheepish: But thank you for the feedback, and sorry for not updating very quickly, I've been swamped with projects... But I am in the process of cooking a new chapter for you guys right no, and it should be done around 5:30-6:10 PST. Thanks for reading! :pinkiehappy:

2616037 Oh my gosh. I feel dumb. I forgot this story was humanized, sorry about that! :twilightblush:

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