What if the world of Equestria was real? How would you want to hear about the inhabitants? Well, let the world of poetry take you on an adventure through the world of Equestria. This is a series of poems I wrote inspired by the show. Also, I kind of written in a way of like taking others on a tour before immediatly posting the poem. Let me know what I need to work on, because this is my very first fanfic.
All rights of My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic belong to Hasbro, The Hub Channel, and Lauren Faust. I always put this with my video poems on Youtube.
Chapters (7)
Now this is impressive, a few errors here and there but over all not bad. I liked it my friend, you did really well.
You have got to love the Mane Six, suprised you did not add one for Spike, will you be adding villians as well as background ponies my friend? Damn, you really good at making poems, I honestly can't wait to see more of this
2080507 Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate your criticism, and if there any errors along the way with my other poems, please let me know. I do my best with all of my poetry to go over it and try to edit it/revise it to make it better. Thank you again.
2080531 Thank you again Inferno demon Dash for your kind words. Oh, don't worry I have a poem for Spike, and yes I am going to try and think of good poems to write about the each of the villians, and try my best to see what I can come up with the background ponies, at least most of the main ones. Thank you again.
Damn, talk about being detailed
Loved every second of it, though I'm not one for when Spike is like a son to Twilight *shivers* and I really dislike Spike/Rarity, but thouse are my own views ad my own options. Even though Spilight is my favorite (Spike/Twilight Sprakle) I can not deny that we all have our own pairings that we all enjoy. I shall await more, you're doing a very great job on this.
Can't wait to see a story of the Gods of Equestria
2081143 Thank you again for your kind words. Well, my favorite pairing of Spike if i may admit is Spike and Applejack. There is just something about Applejack I think will make a great marefriend for Spike. I just got to think of what I want to write for each character and try to make enough verses for that character. Thank you again.
2081371 That pairing is amazing and there are some very well made Apple Spike fics out there, all very well thought of
This chapter made me smile, I love the CMC, Sweetie Belle being my favorite, and this was really well made. You done an amazing job with this chapter, really enjoyed it. Though you have an error with not putting a space between Apple Bloom, other then that a 14/10
2082332 Thank you. I made that correction you told me about, thank you for that. My favorite CMC although I love all of them has to be Applebloom. I am currently working on a poem for Zecora. I am working on it in my head, so when I get what I want to write about her, then you will see the next chapter. Thank you for your kind words and support.
Ah Zecora, she is amazing, I'm honestly suprised this is not getting more reviews, it's very well written, though I spotted an erorr but nothing major....have you done one for the Gods yet?
2099020 Thank you for your kind words. That is okay, I am brand new here to the site, and I am going to try and think of new fanfics to write. No I haven't, but I will try my best. Next I am going to write about the villians of MLP: FIM. What was the error, please let me know, and I will go over it?! Thank you again.
2099967 Never a problem, I hear you bro, it's all chill. Can't wait to see your first story, right
That is going to be fun, and I honestly can't remember, no big deal though.
Damn...even the Gods don't have it easy, how buck up. But seriously very well written, Iloved this chapter, this and your Spike one are my favorite brother, can't wait to see more
2115311 Thank you my friend. It was difficult for me to come up with a whole poem for each villian personally, so that is why I decided to write one single poem with each stanza representing them. I am going to think of who else I can write about, then I am going to give a fanfic idea that I had in my head a run. Thank you for your kind words always.
Damn that's sad, but honest. Ha, I love the windows, Elements of Harmony, the Crystal Savior (Spike), one showing of Celestia and Luna then another of Cadence (Goddess of Love) and Shining Armor, something about those windows hold a deep history for the land of Equestria.
You done very, very well for this, I'm very impressed and really can't wait to see other fics that shall be written by you bro
2132316 Thank you always for your kind words, they are truly appreciated my friend. Oh, I love the windows of Canterlot Castle, they are beautiful, and each tell a story of Equestria. I will might post a blog entry about my next fanfic I am thinking about doing. Thank you again for your kind comments my friend.
2132452 Never a problem, it's my honor to aid a friend in their writing and you done very well here. That's cool, can't wait to see what else you will have planned
That was awesome. I honestly am I big fan to spike. reading this I was amazed on how you captured him so well.
2528673 Huge Spike fan here too my friend, and I wanted to capture him perfectly. Thank you always for your kind words and wonderful support. Also, thank you for favoriting this story.
Zecora would be proud
2639084 Hehe..thank you. I guess I can relate to Zecora, although she isn't my fav. pony, because me and her likes to speak in rhyme, well, I like to write in rhyme while she likes to speak in rhyme.