This story is a sequel to Maybe it...
Part 26-27 in the Maybe series... With Chrysalis defeated every pony is once again safe, but as our characters soon learn the one simple truth of their lives; nothing can ever be just simple when dealing with the unknown forces and affects of magic as once again their love will be strained.
To my old readers, I welcome you to the new arc of the maybe series, hope you enjoy it.
To new readers even thought I suggest starting at an earlier part, you might be able to start here if you would keep an open mind.
*Other parts will be updated with this*
Chapters (9)
*unread etc. ...*
can't wait till tomorrow... but some things, like that, has to be savored ^^
good work ^^
easy to read, many action, good intended confusion ^^ the Lifeblood pulses ^^
We're ALIVE!!!!!
Take that Chrysalis! You can't knock us off that easily!
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Yes! But who are are you? And who am I ?
in this situation "betrunkener Narr.", "betrunken Narr" isn't matching in this situation ^^
And if you want to add another German term, replace "Drunk!" in the last direct speech with "Suffkop".
It is some quite humoristic slang for Drunk and not so intensely insulting like "Säufer" and as far as my translationprogs are saying "Suffkop" means Souse.
any ways nice chapter, well played the partial amnesia. ^^
ahnungsloses Pony ^^
betrunkener Freund ^^
Nice, good work. ^^ smooth chapter ~
man, good work here ^^
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Hervorragend! super work, perfectly the wrong thing what the Girls are doing there, nice 'nearly escalation' of the situation ^^.
- Do NEVER tell some one panicking with amnesia that they shell calm down after you have said them something like that... ^^ just let them run of or go but stay in there relative surrounding.
"hmpf... some how it sounds like the title of a dictionary... but no, no idea..."
Speaking with some one who have amnesia about, what he or she have forgotten is usually pointless. Some that was confusing and definitely out of the ordinary usually has a far better chance to force him/her to remember, like a very unexpected kiss or slap or or or... ^^
YES! ^^ Violet is still mute ^^ good decision ^^ nice Chapter.
Even if this statement sounds incredible brutal it is simply the truth ^^
Until now this Part's have the feeling of spring in them ^^, fresh, changing, new, rebirth, redo, return... super matching ^^
good work, good work, here take some cookies ^^
there is nothing to say... I just have a suspicion~~~ has he become an eternal being?~~~
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Surrender the cookies
What a fine mess I've got myself into...
Great work. I'm very picky about cliffhangers because I don't like getting all pissed off and confused at the end of a story and having to wait for the rest of it to come out, but this one was perfect. Keep doing what you do. I'll be sure to check out the next part when it comes out.
~Mike~
drunk? I am insulted! I have never ever been drunk before!!!! I'm calling my lawyer!
*takes three steps then falls and passes out on floor*
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lol
AWWWW
why can't he remember anything.
im too young for that cidarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrra grgblegrble
drugs he drugged me
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lol
i think you mean in the top of your tongue right?
i laughed at the age part
my heart is going to explode
and then a sleek curved black horn protruded from my head and a pair of bug like wings came out of my back and when i opened my they were blue...
*puts on best batman voice* wheres Chrysalis, *hoof to the face* WHERE IS SHE!!
lol
I want out. Screw my memories! I'll go to.......uh........on second thought, I'm better off staying here.......
This Isant going to end well.
2482199 some one call a medic