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Fat1thatyoulove


Nov 7th "Maybe"

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This story is a sequel to Maybe for the best


Part 19 in the Maybe series. As our character finally has come to terms with what he really wants the question presents its self...will he still keep his mind set on acceptance as something life changing has happens?

To old readers I say this...Enjoy this series end and have fun waiting for the next one I also would like to tell you, the next two series will get your goat then ride it in front of you. (metaphors are magic). To new readers I suggest going back and starting an an earlier part this way you're not confused.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 42 )

Well that was... how would i say... OK, this is how i feel: :twilightoops::twilightsmile::raritystarry::rainbowhuh::pinkiehappy::pinkiegasp::moustache::facehoof::yay::ajbemused::rainbowdetermined2:. All of this same time.

For those about to rock we salute you.

Damn good story twilights pregnant there in love what more can I ask for damn I just realized something im addicted to romance fics.

Bravo! Good sir, bravo!:moustache:

Someone pick up the phone, BECAUSE I FUCKING CALLED IT! :flutterrage:

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I agree! :heart:

but its Fatty, so that means there is like another part right?

So what the F do you have planned? :raritycry: Wait I don't want to know...awww but that's like a week wait!

I KNEW IT! I knew there was great danger with human magic,and it did what I thought it would.It combined with Twilight's magic, and has made her's unstable. As for her survival...well....the ponies haven't dealt with human magic combining or mixing with another ponies magic so.....yeah......:ajsleepy:

......................................................Killjoy...........................................................:ajbemused:

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I bet changelings are involved. It's only a matter of time before Chrysalis gets word that Twilight is pregnant, and what better way to capture the Element of Magic, then to kidnap her child and use it as bait!:ajsmug:

I had my suspicions ever since the morning she woke up feeling sick for the first time...And it looks like I guessed it right! Twilight was pregnant after all!:pinkiehappy::yay::rainbowlaugh:

some how the first half felt ... inkhorn / artificially I don't know why it feels just strange ^^"

[nets] nothing else to say ^^

She walks next to you now as she talks,“Twilight should be up by now, so lets go.” She pushes you to the stairs as she talks.

^^

walks and talks shouldn't be in the same part sentence, it looks strange, try "steps " ^^

“Twilight said she enjoyed the cupcakes so I made her a fresh batch. Want to try one?”

The P and Twi are friends for quite some time, so i would think that Pinkie would probably say "Twilight enjoys cupcakes, so i made her a fresh batch. Want to try one?"

You stare at the bed in the middle of the room, from the brownish colors sheet you can she her purple hair poking out from it. Again you call her name a little more quietly, “Twilight?”

still good work ^^

*insert dramatic music here*

Thats to good! ^^ omg i even feel unable to thing about criticize right now... LOL...good work...

darn... you know criticize an "hey, one of the main characters is pregnant!" Chapter is rude and not ok...

So i can't criticize right now... its to extreme ^^"

btw... goooooood work ^^, I love it ^^

P.S. It made me smile ^^

P.S.S. I want to double Fave this...

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Thank you for pointing it out, my editor has failed me yet again...why...why...Stony?!

Anyways hope you enjoy the oping to the new 3 part-er.

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What? u no liek pony xzibit?

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No I do, I am just scared cause you can tell the future.

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meh, my abilities pale in comparison to yours. If you think about it by writing this story you have created a whole new alternate reality!
Philosophy for the win!
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i have said it before and i will say it again...HHHOOOLLLYY SSHHHIIITTT!!!!!

me: these cupcakes are drugged so don't eat them all at once
twi: what?
me: *blink* um... nothing, don't worry about it.

That's not rainbow dash, her eyes flickerd orenge, the only one that I know of in the this world with orenge eyes is ... is ... discord!:ajbemused::pinkiegasp::rainbowhuh::flutterrage:

:pinkiehappy::raritywink::twilightsmile::yay::rainbowlaugh::ajsmug::derpytongue2::trixieshiftright::moustache::trollestia:
well done my friend you have made my day that little bit beter.

Comment posted by dargondarkfire deleted Mar 8th, 2013

:ajsmug: I really like this.
thou i have to say:pinkiehappy:
I had a gut feeling twilight was pregnant during the chapter right after they beat discord and she darted to the bathroom after waking up to throw up.:pinkiecrazy: my head basically screamed MORNING SICKNESS!:pinkiehappy:
I really want to see were this is going:twilightblush:

I also notice that you seem to post an entire story all at one time and that this one isn't. not complaining but wow cliffhanger?

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recommend any others like this?

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Ya I do a part a week unless I think it looks better as a full story (like Maybe What's needed is us).Most likely part 22-25 will be together but that's not for bit.

Happy to see the story can be enjoyed by a new reader, hope you will stay tune to the next parts, I do one weekly so welcome to the torture of waiting that you can only get by Fatty :pinkiecrazy:

And thank you spetsnaz for the reader. :heart:

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just curious, jut this story is still marked as incomplete. is there another chapter to this one or is it move on to the next story segment?:unsuresweetie:

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I do part not chapters, go to the next part (part 20 Maybe I always...) if you want to follow the story.

Each part is a story each 3 parts a series each series a plot maker for the story...I'm weird lol hope you enjoy part 20.Here is a link insace you didnt see it get posted. Maybe I always...

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... yes i under stand that. but each part is separated into chapters of its own... you may not consider it that way, but thats how the site is set up....
and if you look at the bottom of this one, it says incomplete. sorry:pinkiesad2:

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yep, I change it to complete when the 3 part series is done, that's why the others say complete... I applaud you for noticing...hint hint, don't forget that.:pinkiesmile:

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ahhh......:derpyderp1: ok... i think i understand now.:pinkiecrazy:

Woah...

Why didn't I see this coming...

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I thought I knew what was going to happen, saw it in chapter one. Then in chapter two I figured out it was a dream. so It kinda killed my joy. Get it?

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Happy to see the length of the series didn't scary you away :twilightsmile:

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