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Fat1thatyoulove


Nov 7th "Maybe"

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This story is a sequel to Maybe I could start to...


This is part 3rd to "Maybe I could". If you want to fully understand the story i suggest you read the first two stories, it's not to long and it would make this story better but you don't have to I give a short recap in the beginning that may help new readers understand the story. For readers that have read the first two story I hope you enjoy the end, just like before I find it better if you read all the way through.

I am still a new writer and i have used the suggestions i received from my other stories for this story, feel free to comment with what you think. Also I don't really like writing action scene so I would say this part of the series is my least favorite but it is need to understand the rest of the story.

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Comments ( 23 )

OHHHHH, nice twist :duck:

Where's a noose when you need one? I don't want to be harvested every day for the rest of my life!!!:fluttershbad:

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Yes I did, and this is a good series.I added the fist story instead of all of it because you put the link for the next one in the one before it.

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Easier said than done.
He still doesn't know how to use his powers yet.
Also, How The Fuck Did Chrysalis Get Back?!

Hold on. Changlings get their power from love, not hate.

2132685 Adaptation to human magic

fus....ro.....
"passes out"

dang all that power from a kiss? slip her some tongue and she may go supernova!

awesome ive never been dubbed before.

2309471 She might. And that would make my day.

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Ahh the journey has just started for you...Good luck if you try to read all 45 parts. :rainbowwild: <- Heck and that's only this week .

One cross-story issue here: Twilight was the one to expose Chrysalis, but then in the subsequent story that same Twilight (without any obvious opportunity for her to have been replaced) is a changeling.

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Changelings gain power from emotions, so all they needed was to have Twilight(changeling) get hurt to draw some kind of emotion. The Guy has no idea who Chrysalis is, so the fact she said has no affect on him but her being in danger did.

Then in part 3 Chrysalis plays with his mind showing him Twilights when they are changelings, meaning she's feeding from emotional fear and pain. ~ :pinkiecrazy:

Idk if it's been said yet, but later in this story it will be beaten into your brain so here it is: Magic is thoughts and emotions, and it affects anything and everything.

3506241 It was planned. the changling twilight and everything.

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:pinkiegasp: I thought you died! I have not seen your name in ages !

“You can’t break magic with brute force.”

Bullshit.

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