This story is a sequel to Maybe and after...
This is part 12th in the Maybe series, this part covers events after Maybe and after. As if being trapped in a book is not bad enough our character has to deal with something even more painful... trying to understand Rainbow Dash weird attraction.
To new readers of this series I hate to say it but I suggest you go and start from the beginning if you want to better understand the story but it's up to you as a read if you want a back story. To old readers this is the end of the maybe and all series and also the set up to the next, I hope you will stay tuned. Feel free to leave feedback.
Chapters (6)
*reserving first Comment for critiques*At first it was a bit... well... how to say it, there was a lack of "Fire" in the first part of the Story, and some how, every thing was a bit strangly short... i don't know how to put it. it feals as if some thing is missing.
*minutes of thinking later*
It feals like you get a bit tirred or bored of your own story, can it be?
but like always a good story, even if it was some how contrived. What's up dud?
*thump up* ^^ nice that you mentioned the "holding a Fork is Magic!" thing again ^^
Yesssssss. Let your imagination flow through you and bring us more of this story.
woho the CMC !!! i nearly laught me unconscious! ^^
nothing to say here as well ^^
and i just wanted to say some thing about "to less Spice in this one" ^^ tehehe
2008516
I agree it did seem like it was missing something, still like this part and I look forward to others!
But what up fatty you not eat a pie before writing or something?
2008516
As to me being board...NEVER!
The first draft of this story (like every part) was to long, but this one was very long and would have dwarfed the others, so I had to cut some stuff and save for latter on. All my stuff ties into each other as you can see thus far. With that said all I will disclose is that if this part feels like it's missing something then I am doing a good job at hiding key parts until they get revealed.
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Cake is good.
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I'm a Jedi now!?
lol thanks
I told you not to cut fatty... I'm still looking forward to more though just add more conflict to the story it really built up and then went.... absolutely nowhere
2008798 its a real relief to hear that ^^ but don't cut pices of it disturbes the Story, your would have many work to do to "resmooth" the Story ^^
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Well hope I you still found these last three parts enjoyable.
2009106 well of cause ^^
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Waa must ya end it raat as things er getin interestin ... aa meen ya dont jus get the hole
thing goin and end it
*sigh* well ... love ya, ah meen ... uh , bye
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lol sorry to get you going Apple, I just think a notion is as good as the real thing...not to say I will never write another clop
There fatass, I'm reading this part finally....NOW LET ME FINISH PLAYING DOOM ON HARD..
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..F1...you know
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You're a douche bag.. Anyways good job on this one, can't wait for the next clopfic.
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lol its not clop
and happy you liked it
I swear if it's the Grand Galloping Gala Twilight will be missing a few books.
Oh god not the CMC, I'm gonna be sore in the morning.
If we find a page with Slendy on it, I'm gonna run till I reach the end of the world.
I don't know what to say this time except no Slenderman!YEAH!
...............No link?*Goes to Fat1thatyoulove's page*
And I thought exercising with Rainbow was tough...
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Don't be scared of old Slendy... All he needs is a hug.
2133659
maybe......maybe........
wait.........oh crud I hear some static!!!
NO! He got John! He owned me $50! WHYYYYYYY!!!!????
HOLY SHIT!!!
I just had an epiphany. The special talents of the cmc are trying to find their cutie-mark, but if they were to get their cutie-marks they would no longer have a special talent. They are walking paradoxes!
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lol
oh boy....
HA she thinks she can make me write
. Also... holy s**t the C.M.C are in the story
2133659 hahahah
Inhaled so much air.