Chapter 6
Chapter 6 (never really simple)
By the time you get back to the library the sun is down and its dark out. You never have been outside in Ponyville when it’s dark out. Not seeing the colorful ponies or the sunlight hitting the hay covered roofs makes this town look like any other town you have ever seen.
Rainbow for some reason has decided to follow you home. As you reach the door you turn to face Rainbow, “Ok night Rainbow.”
Rainbow puts her hoof on your chest, “Remember don’t tell Twilight about where you were, she would totally freak!”
"ok."
Rainbow flaps her wings and brings herself off the ground, “ok C’ya tomorrow.”
Tomorrow? You don’t remember agreeing to anything tomorrow but you honestly you can’t really think straight with the dirt burn you have on your back. Note to self, don’t lay on back tonight.
As enter the door you head up stairs, you’re too tired right now to even think about food.
About halfway up the stairs you hear your name called out. You turn to face Twilight at the bottom of the stairs. “I see you didn’t get your cutie mark…was it fun?”
Your back is burning but you put that aside, “Yep.” You continue up the stairs as she talks.
“You’re going to sleep?”
“Yep.”
“Um..ok good night.”
Her voice becomes distant as you near and climb into your bed.
(later)
You expected to wake up when Twilight climbed into the bed, and like you thought you did. While you’re sleeping your back does not burn but while you’re awake it feels like you’re on fire.
She is quick to turn and say sorry as she notices your eyes in the moonlight.
You would go back to sleep but you're now to awake.
As she starts to get comfortable you slowly move your hoof to her side. You have accepted the fact you can no longer rub her ears like you use to do, which makes you a bit sad but you think you know something else that might give a cute reaction.
You rest your hoof on her cutie mark as you start to massage it slowly. She fidgets in the bed for a few moments before she turns to you. “What are you doing?”
You didn’t get the reaction you thought you would and you now feel a little stupid, “Umm..”
She stares at you for a moment, “Do you know what touching a mare’s cutie mark dose to her?”
You blink your eyes waiting for her to explain.
She moves closer to you as she whispers in your ear. “It drives them crazy.” She quickly moves her head from your ear and plants an excitable wet kiss on your lips…
End of chapter 6
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*reserving first Comment for critiques*At first it was a bit... well... how to say it, there was a lack of "Fire" in the first part of the Story, and some how, every thing was a bit strangly short... i don't know how to put it. it feals as if some thing is missing.
*minutes of thinking later*
It feals like you get a bit tirred or bored of your own story, can it be?
but like always a good story, even if it was some how contrived. What's up dud?
Yesssssss. Let your imagination flow through you and bring us more of this story.
2008516
I agree it did seem like it was missing something, still like this part and I look forward to others!
But what up fatty you not eat a pie before writing or something?
2008516
As to me being board...NEVER!
The first draft of this story (like every part) was to long, but this one was very long and would have dwarfed the others, so I had to cut some stuff and save for latter on. All my stuff ties into each other as you can see thus far. With that said all I will disclose is that if this part feels like it's missing something then I am doing a good job at hiding key parts until they get revealed.
2008731
Cake is good.
2008576
I'm a Jedi now!?
lol thanks
I told you not to cut fatty... I'm still looking forward to more though just add more conflict to the story it really built up and then went.... absolutely nowhere
2008798 its a real relief to hear that ^^ but don't cut pices of it disturbes the Story, your would have many work to do to "resmooth" the Story ^^
2008927
Well hope I you still found these last three parts enjoyable.
2009106 well of cause ^^
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Waa must ya end it raat as things er getin interestin ... aa meen ya dont jus get the hole
thing goin and end it
*sigh* well ... love ya, ah meen ... uh , bye
2009595
lol sorry to get you going Apple, I just think a notion is as good as the real thing...not to say I will never write another clop
There fatass, I'm reading this part finally....NOW LET ME FINISH PLAYING DOOM ON HARD..
2039581
..F1...you know
2039656
You're a douche bag.. Anyways good job on this one, can't wait for the next clopfic.
2039684
lol its not clop
and happy you liked it
...............No link?*Goes to Fat1thatyoulove's page*
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maybe......maybe........
wait.........oh crud I hear some static!!!
NO! He got John! He owned me $50! WHYYYYYYY!!!!????
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lol