MightyShockwave
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You did a pretty good job giving it a distinctly Pinkie and RD flavor; they both reacted to the situation very differently than Twilight and Rarity. I'd love to see more of these.
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Thanks, a lot of the time these fics often get a bit too samey, so I try to make things different. Got an idea? I'm having trouble deciding on what the next one should be.
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since you've set up continuity a bit I'd continue it. Fluttershy is very in tune with animals, maybe she tries the oil and finds herself falling into the rhythm of it and a normal encounter with Applejack results in her being overwhelmed by the instinct to hypnotize her? There's nothing wrong with additional encounters between characters you've done already; Rarity might enjoy the power and corner Twilight and Spike in the library for round two, or go after Rainbow after hearing from Pinkie that she has that fetish. Or Twilight tests the oil (for science!) and runs creepy tests on how far she can take her hypnotized friends (like seeing how much she can alter their minds).
I'm a fan of shifting to a slightly overarching plot where one or two lamias go out of control with the hypnosis and start taking over the town/Equestria, but there's something to be said for sticking to one-shots too.
Whatever you do, it should end with a hypno orgy at the end of it all.
That was an interesting read, thank you.
I enjoyed this continuation
So is there going to be more?
Are you going to do one with other members of the main 6 or other form the town, I don't know why but I would like to say (mind you I am just joking now) Cute Mark Crusaders Hypnotist! yah!
though I did like the different reactions that these two played off each other.
I also thought the last part was funny too.
Hope everything works out.
Best luck in the future.
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Nah, I'm actually toying with that CMC idea. Of course that one wouldn't be lewd, but hypnosis can be used for silly shenanigans too.
Finals have been taking their toll though. I'll write and draw more when they're done.
2504746 yah, I know what you mean.
What it worst then finals is pulling double shifts and doing finals on 4 hours sleep.
As for the CMC, I'm glad that you didn't think I was talking it being lewd. (I have do be careful what I type)
For me I also get writers block and it take a while to work through it.
That's great you are going to keep going.
I hope that everything will turn out OK.
Best of luck.
(Joke) Alt. Title: Don't Tread On Me: Why Did It Have To Be Snakes?
I swear I kind of saw this story somewhere before, but with Fluttershy and Sunset instead of Rainbow and Pinkie. But, then again, ICIP, I guess.
Moar please
Looks like the curse sends ponies on a power trip
lesbian pony lamia hypnosis sex? what can i say but HOLY SHIT SO AWESOME, i cant stand rainbow dash and dont think pinkie pie is sexy and i STILL loved every moment of this. plz plz do more of these!!!!! id love to see zecora lamia having her way with a mare or two!
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I was just coming back to re-read this story again when I saw this comment.
I was the one who wrote that story with Sunset and Fluttershy, and I feel you should know that that story was inspired by "Snakity", which MightyShockwave also wrote, and which this story is basically a sequel to.
We've come full circle, or something.
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And, get this, after seeing your story, I decided to do my own take on this whole "pony turns into snake and has sex" thing. It's going to be called Laika Come Home and... Oh, you don't care?Whoops, my bad. I should really stop plugging my s#!t...
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It's good to plug yourself!
And I do care! It sounds interesting to me! Let me know when its published.
. . . Although if we continue this discussion, we should move it to a PM.
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Well, if you wanna know what I plan to do in that story, you can PM if you want. If not, I'll make sure to tell you when it's up (if I ever finish it).
Wow, I didn't even know stories like this existed. This is an awesome story!
They didn't call her Kinky Pie for nothing.
but Pinkie
washad a single goalas spirals began to reflect in her eyes once... more or again?
When I say the word
This disturbed me more than anything else.
Meh.