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TAW


Hi, I'm TAW. I write terrible erotic my little pony fan fiction about cartoon horses having sex with each other, or vaguely defined human audience-inserts, for fun. Because... uh. I have no shame?

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Hm, mildly insane clopfics. Great! I am not sure why but I somehow enjoy these...

interesting why does it sound like twi just did somthing very ilegal:twilightblush:

That was...sexy and evil. The parts of Trixie's fantasy and the real world were a bit hard to follow, and there were some weird sentences with grammatical issues here and there. But, overall, as a mature fic with Trixie and Twilight with the latter coming out on top for once, it was wasn't half-bad. I do feel bad for Trixie, though...although, deep down, that's probably what she REALLY wanted all along.

:twilightsmile::heart::trixieshiftright:

116672 Granted, i think it would be justified for trixie having tried it, not just once, but twice, to have it turned on her. Turnabout is fair-play after-all.

I quite enjoyed this little quick-fic(x). Enough detailing to let us know what's going on inside the mind, while also describing the scene. If the fantasy had been a larger part, as in total volume, I would have preferred a more plain divider between fantasy and reality for trixie... i know that she has trouble with that at times... *giggle*.

But either way, well written.

I need to stop reading stories like this. They distress me.

Long live the Great and Powerful Trixie:trixieshiftleft:

well I've got a boner for the first time in 2 weeks.

thanks.

A great read, very entertaining. It also seemed like a more light hearted version of Disobedience, and unless the effect is still temporary even after the full wipe, then this is a rather dark story. Because it would have turned Trixie into a soulless shell of a pony.....but then again I never was that fond of her.

TAW

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Yeah, this was my first foray into mind-control (Well, second, but... yeah, nobody's seeing the first) so I wasn't sure how dark I could make it without facing a backlash. So, I made it pretty lighthearted, chose to parody twixie, and did it to a character almost nobody likes (though is still mentally strong enough to make breaking her enjoyable)

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Well for a first public go at it, you did an exceedingly wonderful job, keep up the great work.

My reaction to seeing that? Beatings. Lots and lots of beatings.:twilightangry2:


"A Man chooses, a Slave obeys!"

Andrew Ryan; Bioshock.

I've read this story fifteen times and I can't take it anymore.
"Disobeying her master" not obeying.

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That was a very scary thought. :pinkiegasp:

Ok I lol'd. And aside from some weird tense shifts nothing too immersion-breaking.

Have an upvote.

"Anything" Spike wants. Yeah, sex is definitely an option there.

Oh god, the letter, I'm dying here. :rainbowlaugh:

I will say this Trixie had it comming, Especially since she was trying to do the same thing to Twilight soo many times. it's just rediculous, so Twisnap, Trixieslave. alls good:twilightsmile:

too bad Trixie has no resistance left in her at the end^^ I loved to see her thoughts 'controlled' by Twilights magic, going back into order just to be controled again^^

I quite enjoyed this one. :pinkiehappy:

haha well I likd this. I"m not sure what part of my brian likes this..not a fetish sort of wya just amuses me like joker.

When one can't make peace enslave

"Want it need it spell works everytime" and so we learn tiwlight secert paln to slowly overtake Celestia as leader.

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