This story is a sequel to Luna's Power and Rainbow's love
It's been a little over a year since Luna has fully regained her power, and less than one month since the re-emergence of the Crystal Empire, when the Princess of The Night decides she wants to find her soulmate. She calls upon the mane six to help find her dates and train her in the arts of dating and romance.
May Celestia have mercy on Canterlot.
Sequel to Luna's Power and Rainbow's Love, though you don't have to to read that story to understand this one.
Chapters (5)
*hopes Luna finds true love*
I enjoy this story.
Interesting, I'm looking forward to seeing where this is going. The only problem I noticed was that at one point you said "Luna was out of her pink socks and in her familiar royal attire, though she still seemed unhappy with her sister, probably because of her very loud, very embarrassing awakening at her .hands"....They're ponies they have hooves, not hands.
2470058 Fixed. Thanks for pointing that one out. Normally I don't screw up like that
Didn't like it, found the writing bland and felt like there was little effort put into the story. All information was dished out abruptly with little purpose and no contribution to the actual plot and the characters seemed pretty dull and lifeless (not completely but there lines all seemed off). Even threw in an obvious shout out for your political stance on gay marriage, that always annoys the hell out of me.
enjoying it. I really can't tell if it will be any of the mane 6 or not at this point in time.maybe not then again maybe. even though she said she didn't like it there is that chance something pops up.
I am enjoying this so far. I look forward to seeing what else you pack into this story. Keep up the great writing!
Liking this, and was expecting this story when you were talking about it after writing Luna's Power and Rainbow's Love. And it's going well.
Though, I find some OOC parts, such as Celestia's choice of awakening Luna. That's just the biggest one. You shouldn't have much concern on the other parts. Other than that, it went pretty well for a start.
2472071 admit hat was rather OOC, though that was only to make Luna want revenge. Celestia should become more in character as time goes on (though this is my first time writing Celestia for anything more than a few paragraphs)
Make sure. It's a pony that will treat her right and kind that kind o f stuff.
If the author's notes don't feel like linking, here's the link in question: http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/163183/ever-have-a-moment-where-you-realize-a-project-is-much-more-ambitious-than-you-thought
great chapter cant wait for the next one
Quite well written. I hope Fluttershy enjoyed it.
I'm feeling too many emotions at once but thats okay
. Adding this to a few folders in Twilight Library.
Also Pinkie and Vinyl. That's really different. Do I smell a spin off lol
There are a couple of grammar errors, but nothing major. I'm looking forward to where this is going next. Do you have a proofreader?
Just for the sake of getting this statement out there before I continue reading-
I really do hope these two end up happy together. They lack the friction of such pairings as AppleDash or Rarijack, but to be honest that just makes their ever-so-slight... awkward distancing of each other all the more alluring to me. I know there's likely going to be serious setbacks in the future (after all, what's a story without conflict?) but those are moments I simply dread after reading such a cute setup as this. xD
Time to read on!
Clowns scares Luna
Spiders scares Celestia
What would scare Cadence?
Is meanwhile, five minutes later a reference to something, or did you just want to say it for some reason?
3331752 spider clowns...or wait..clown spiders
3331752 Zombees! (flesh eating bees)
My Little Human , My Little Human
Ahh, ahh, ahh, ahhh...
(My Little Human)
I used to wonder what friendship could be
(My Little Human)
Until you all shared its magic with me
Big adventure
Tons of fun
A beautiful heart
Faithful and strong
Sharing kindness!
It's an easy feat
And magic makes it all complete
You have my little humans
Do you know you're all my very best friends?
INCEPTION BOOM