Two mares in Equestria are in desperate need of help. One mare, commonly known as Rainbow Dash, has broken both of her wings in a terrible flying accident. Stuck in a hospital bed for weeks, the arrogant mare feels that she needs no help at all. Of course, when a certain Wonderbolt offers assistance, his offer is hard to refuse. The other mare, commonly known as Princess Celestia, is in a dreadful position. Her sister Luna has set up a blind date for her in Ponyville, and Celestia believes that she has almost no experience with stallions or dating. This princess feels that she needs all the help she can get. Will these mares get through their situations, or will they fail terribly? All they need is a little help . . .
Chapters (7)
This is just a short story that I'm writing to practice my writing kills. I kinda wanted to make it funny and random too, so that's what i did
hope you like it and get a good laugh out of it! 
-Dream Shine
Very random... Me gusta.
2548943 thank you
Make longer chapters.
The longer your chapters, the more solid your story telling must be. As such the better your writing must be.
2548998 thanks for the advice :D
I concur with the longer chapters statement.
Following this to see how things play out
yeah i should really make my chapters longer
i'm workin on that now. i guess i just get so carried away with trying to finish these that i make them short. don't worry, though. the next chapter will be way longer 
I'm not a fan of short chapters... but I laughed at the end and found no problem with this as an intro.
I composed a poem for you:
Hello comedy tag.
How are you today?
I'm pretty alright
How'd the surgery g- hehehehehehehehehe.
Obviously, it's not my best attempt at poetry.
Could it possibly be... The King?
2549403 possibly......
i'll fave for now.
If you noticed, I've been doing a pattern with my chapters, and it goes Celestia's POV, Rainbow's POV. So the next chapter will be Dash's POV. I'm purposely not publishing it yet because I like cliff-hangers
Oh Celestia that was good. It was so funny if this is any sign of things to come I can tell imma love this
Oh man this is funny stuff. I can already tell this is going to be a fantastic read. Hopefully the chapters will get a bit longer cause these are just great
XD and it just keeps getting better. Luna's whole scrapbook gag is great and Celestia asking Spike for romantic advice excuse me while i go and die of laughter
It's a shame I can only like this once it's too good. Well now I'm waiting for the next chapter...hurry up
HUZZAH!
SHIPPING POWERS, ACTIVATE!
flies to space
Ma.... my belly!!
IT HURTS!!!!
Sometimes Princess Celestia wished that ponies were more like pillows.
Eehhh... Y'allright there princess?
BANANAS!!!
YOU'RE KILLING ME!!!! 
That was quick but who am i to say that
There's no easy way to say this.
yay, new chapter!
sorry this one took so long, I've been really busy lately. But new chapters will be coming quicker!!! 
Luna.... you are both adoreble and evil xD
Yay! I'm glad that the chapters will be quicker! I love this story
2788468 why thank you....
and i'm hoping to get more of Luna's mischievous side in this story 
watch out Celestia!
Why can't I stop smiling?! I love the soarindash parts
More Please
Although it could be a bit longer its still cute and funny
Oh, luna
More please
MOAR!!!
WAHAA THAT WAS SOOO FUNNY! I thought Luna was gonna stab Celstia!
4709401 Me too.
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Is the date with Discord? Ooh, is it with Sombra?