I'm Zyr1987 (Rhymes with sir) and I'm currently the only person to write stories about Fleur de Lis to any great extent. I also ship extensively and have been taking to combining the two in my stories
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When Fleur de Lis comes to Ponyville to help her friend, Rarity, earn Hoity Toity's endorsement, Fluttershy finds herself falling head over heels for the prench model.
Unfortunately, Fluttershy is too nervous to admit her feelings to Fleur, even after Rarity finds out about them. Will this be the one that got away or will she find the courage to ask her out and possibly land the catch of a lifetime?
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lesbian pony just because.
brilliant characterisation.
more please
Heh, that was good. Nicely done, dude.
~Skeeter The Lurker
Firstly a few errors here and there but im not mocking it... its a wonderful story and if you keep on going on it it will become so much more than what it is here, Further more no one likes a perfectionist in writing just keep going and then come back. this is my advise to you as you would already know probably, but i just cant stand a story like this be ended so soon when it has so much more to offer. Anyways my mindless babble aside Good story
Unfortunately, this story does not qualify just yet for inclusion in the Directory. However, there are a few easily-fixed errors that, once fixed, would allow me to include you. The errors are as follows:
Should be she's.
There should be a comma after "you."
Also, Prench should be capitalized just as French would be.
I love how she falls for a "prench" model. Seriously, look in the description. It says prench instead of French. It should also be capitalized. I`m going to begin reading the story now.
EDIT: Now that I look, it seems as though you`re doing it on purpose. You still need to capitalize "prench" though.
I award you one 'like', thank you for the entertaining read.
shadowblitz13's annual shipping contest official review
Positive
1. Fluttershy stays true to the series.
2. Fleur Dis Lee uses french like any prench pony should.
3. Fleur is in character by being embarrassed by saying something uncouth, as she is a high society pony.
4.Rarity is the instigator(?) as she usually is.
5. Fleur uses the correct french in the correct situations.
Negative
1. Minor conventions, grammar, and spelling errors.
2. Spitfire is possibly out of character when she begs Fleur to get the flight suits.
3. Fleur Dis Lee's name was misspelled in the beginning of the story.
4. Unless intentionally making Fleur and Fluttershy alone together, Rarity is out of character by losing her dress designs.
Um, are you aware that almost your entire story is in italics? You seem to have a broken [ /i ] tag in there.
is this a flutterfleur or fleurshy
"any little difficulty with this story sent my stress levels shooting up for some reason (my inner perfectionist is going nuts, I think)" Sounds like your inner Rarity shined through for this story
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Fluershy sounds nicer in my opinion