Featuring Ponyphonic's 'the moon rises' (EileMony cover) and 'lullaby for a princess' (cover by megaphoric).
Coverart by Pinkamena666
Princess Celestia and Princess Luna remember the events that led to Nightmare Moon's creation and banishment. This is a tale of heartache, betrayal and sorrow as the two alicorns share their tale with the world.
Note: Bits and pieces of the above songs wil be used, as in they won't be sung in full by the characters.
Edit 2: Despite wanting to have nighmare moon get her own musical number i decided that to just end it on act IV (see author's notes)
Edit 3: please read the last chapter and comment, having a bit of trouble finishing it and i would like some feedback.
Edit 4: I only own the idea, all songs belong to the original artists. MLP FiM belongs to Hasbro.
I have a song for Nightmare Moon
2416237 It fits her very and also very sad.
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I'd like to point out thatthe song used in chapter 2 IS the moon rises by ponyphonic....
2423155 I know right?
Doing act 4 now.
Better than me though.
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Hehe yeah, I realized that too late.
Really? 151 views, 12 likes, and, now, only one comment on this chapter? I was wondering why there were plenty of obvious mistakes... well, me being me, cannot let this stand. From the beginning... (now I'm almost glad that the chapter is so short)... erm... well you obviously know your grammar and spelling and you gave a good reason as to why there are so many mistakes in this, I have one thing to say, and I know it's one of the last things one wants to do after writing a chapter and sometimes you just don't have time. However, read the chapter over when you're done writing, I don't mean to be rude, just a helpful suggestion. Take the time to check for mistakes on your own, it saves any possible embarrassment, makes it look better, and gives it a higher chance of having someone leave praising comments and good feedback. Now with that said, I'm still going to point out mistakes, because mistakes irk me. As I stated before that you know grammar I'm just going to correct it as you don't need me spewing out the rules here... Also, I'm nit picky and I point out everything... everything.
Not quite sure, but I think you meant to write, "that held so much, yet was known by so few."
Um... "and artworks were revealed to a white Alicorn..."? Maybe?
And I meant everything!
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the way you've outlined the mistakes is exactly the kind of thing I need for a proofreader....seriously my grammar kinda sucks to be honest and due to fast typing, vision impairment and other things I tend to create a few typos and while I try and get them all i do miss a few.
so..wanna be my proofreader?
2668491 I guess it couldn't hurt. You got yourself a proofreader then, I'll PM you with the corrections for the rest of the chapters and any other stories you'd like me to look at.
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thanks.
Just to clarify, the elements were jewels not jewelry. They didn't become jewelry until Twilight and her friends became the bearers a thousand years later.
To be fair, I wrote this long before I knew that the elements were gems.
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luna not woona (unless discord is being anoying)
the elements were jewels at that time, not jewelery
7748853 thank you for commenting but if you read through older comments you'll find that I wrote this before the show revealed the elements were gems.