The cuteness factor has DOUBLED!!

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I can understand why Celestia and Luna would take a consort. Most ponies probably have the mindset that because they're the rulers of Equestria and in their minds 'godesses' that it wouldn't be right to to get close to them or try to befriend them.

for a second there....but it didnt. good job dude nice pace too

Awesome can't wait for more!

I must say, the way that you are approaching this story, no... more than that... the way that you are approaching this topic itself is wonderful! I look forward to more chapters from you!

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I found little Philomena here at the edge of the Everfree Forrest many years ago injured and alone.

Just a little mistake I noticed.

As always, another fantastic chapter.

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Got it fixed up for you.

Glad you're enjoying it so far.

Nice. Really, really nice. So Blueblood is an honorary prince. That is so rich. I just want to know when Thunder Shock is going to spend some time with Luna?

If blueblood Is an 'honorary prince' then why would Thundershock get a hug from Celestia if blueblood doesn't have any real power over him? Should blueblood's title be apparent to the rest of Equestria? Its a great chapter with very little crammed errors but that just bugged me for some reason. Not to mention what Celestia did. Made Thundershock sleep with her. A little selfish on her part. The only way it will get even is if Luna makes Thunder sleep with her.......Such a troll!

Enjoying this so far. You definitely know how to write a whirlwind upheaval in someone's life.

Minor nit: if 200 bits/month is a reasonable salary for Thunder Shock, then 2000 bits is not even on the right scale for a component of a national military budget that's worth Celestia's time to discuss; that wouldn't even be one guard's annual salary. Not like Equestria needs a huge military (given its size, and especially with three Princesses and the Elements around), but they certainly have a fair number of guards. Might want to scale it up to a hundred thousand bits or so; enough to be worth talking about without being ludicrous.

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Edited that for you. Thanks for the feedback, only way I'll grow as a writer.

Awww moments like that just bring out the warm fuzzy feelings in me. Those moments where Prince Blueblood gets railed by one of the princess cause he's a jerk.... so nice

That part with Blueblood

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