Pretty good so far. The pacing is PERFECT. Not too slow and not too fast either. But at the rate things are going, 7-8 chapters isn't too far fetched. I hope you can make it that long to get to the good parts. Too many authors start a great story like this, then just drop it in the middle. Don't be one of those authors!
After having read the first three chapters, I must say I am impressed - you have taken a premise that could have easily been used as a cheap way to get someone in to Celestia's / Luna's bed, but instead are taking the time to do justice by it and going for a serious approach regarding the whole Consort business. It's nice to see Thunder being put through a break-neck paced, life-changing experience and watching him struggle to keep up. I don't doubt that other characters will provide some interesting reactions to the situation as well, as the news circulate and Thunder gets to lounge around the castle more and meet some locals. Blueblood would be an "interesting" encounter, heh.
So would Twi, for that matter - seeing she is in the character tags, I wonder how she will react to the news (probably with much flustering, heh) and what role she will end up playing in the whole ordeal. Unless the reason Celestia and Luna are doing it now is to get the newest Princess comfortable with the idea .. though I am probably getting ahead of myself here.
Anyways, solidly written and interestingly set up, I'm definitely looking towards to see where this story goes from here.
Keep up the good work!
I applaud you sir!
Yay !
Pretty good so far. The pacing is PERFECT. Not too slow and not too fast either. But at the rate things are going, 7-8 chapters isn't too far fetched. I hope you can make it that long to get to the good parts. Too many authors start a great story like this, then just drop it in the middle. Don't be one of those authors!
Pray, continue?
Very nice chapter. I look forward to seeing how this story progresses.
Thunder Shock is one lucky colt.
2879335 I'm guilty of that one. (except my story wasn't that great anyway.) good luck to this author!
I like it a lot. Keep up the good work.
Honestly I wish I wrote this well lol.
I really like how you are focusing on Thunder being an actual consort rather than just an excuse for clop. Keep up the good work!
After having read the first three chapters, I must say I am impressed - you have taken a premise that could have easily been used as a cheap way to get someone in to Celestia's / Luna's bed, but instead are taking the time to do justice by it and going for a serious approach regarding the whole Consort business. It's nice to see Thunder being put through a break-neck paced, life-changing experience and watching him struggle to keep up. I don't doubt that other characters will provide some interesting reactions to the situation as well, as the news circulate and Thunder gets to lounge around the castle more and meet some locals. Blueblood would be an "interesting" encounter, heh.
So would Twi, for that matter - seeing she is in the character tags, I wonder how she will react to the news (probably with much flustering, heh) and what role she will end up playing in the whole ordeal. Unless the reason Celestia and Luna are doing it now is to get the newest Princess comfortable with the idea .. though I am probably getting ahead of myself here.
Anyways, solidly written and interestingly set up, I'm definitely looking towards to see where this story goes from here.
2883548 I concur.