It took me this long to realize it, but everyone in this series of yours is either an irredeemable monster (there is no way your Discord actually gives two shits about his "friendship" or anyone else), or -- at the very least -- somewhat innocent and thus is going to suffer a horrible fate.
What can I say, he's a forgettable character for me. I had wanted to kill him off in chapter one but forgot that also. Assuming he's the over dramatic wuss most rich snobs are, he's probably still in the hospital whining and complaining about a paper cut.
In the prequel, 'The Fire in Her Eyes', you are the courier (story is in second person). So technically, 'you' are the courier. If that makes sense at all...
after reading chapter 11 i dont want any of that romeo and juliet bullshit cause if thunderbird dies then fluer is more than likely going to kill her self i mean she let some dude rape her just so she could see him
Calling this fucking shit right now. Chrysabitch decided she wasn't going to hold her end of the bargain, and sent a changeling to the barracks. The changeling disguised as the lieutenant and "authorized" the shipping of thunderbird to cunterlot. Not sure of her motive though. Perhaps Ray told Chrysy to do so because he wanted thundy dead. No idea. But I am SO calling this, because of the fact that the lieutenant wouldn't have done it without Twi's permission, yet the guard claimed the lieutenant himself ordered it. Thundy is a good griffon, and wouldn't have driven the real lieutenant to so much rage as to cause him to commit such a rash decision without Twi's approval, either, so the "driven by rage" idea is pretty out of the question too. However, if Chrysy is doing this for Ray, then that means she probably allied with the griffons, which means Equestria is essentially buttfucked. CALLING
Normally I don't like confirming/denying speculations on upcoming chapters, but I'll tell you now that the described scenario won't happen, mainly because I have a hard time writing Chrysalis/changelings into my stories (it just feels like cheating when using them to infiltrate like that). No, I'm pretty sure the one chapter with Chrysalis and Cadence will be the only appearance for them in this story.
Son of a bitch!! Stupid-ass guards! Ugh, they're going to cause the death of an innocent griffon! And this is supposed to be war, whatever happened to the, ya know, war? Or are we just in the beginning phases? Oh well, nearing the end of it now.
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It took me this long to realize it, but everyone in this series of yours is either an irredeemable monster (there is no way your Discord actually gives two shits about his "friendship" or anyone else), or -- at the very least -- somewhat innocent and thus is going to suffer a horrible fate.
fuck you
spare him as in him thunderbird.
Well, sh*t... Here I thought that this was going to see if he had survived or not... DAMN YOU CLIFFHANGERSSSSS!!!!!
Buuuuttt... nice job on writing the chapter on it! Can't wait for the next one. Sh*t is gonna go down!
i brought up the question about fancy pants
You're really trying to hard to kill your readers, huh...?
well, it seems thundy got the good ol' thumbs down
Thunderbird better be alright... D:
2815719 nope, fleur is gonna bust through the doors just as tbirds getting beheaded, that my prediction, i hope its wrong but, this is TheCamel!
Fancy Pants... Lets just say he... Died. Yea, that's it. He died of... Uh... Yea...
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I'll just say this... all is fair in love and war.
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What can I say, he's a forgettable character for me. I had wanted to kill him off in chapter one but forgot that also. Assuming he's the over dramatic wuss most rich snobs are, he's probably still in the hospital whining and complaining about a paper cut.
I liked the story. Now, I just want to know "Celestia's courier" and his name, then I can totally understand all this shit.
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In the prequel, 'The Fire in Her Eyes', you are the courier (story is in second person). So technically, 'you' are the courier. If that makes sense at all...
Wow dude, you just love making so that everything that could go wrong, goes wrong.
after reading chapter 11 i dont want any of that romeo and juliet bullshit cause if thunderbird dies then fluer is more than likely going to kill her self i mean she let some dude rape her just so she could see him
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It takes specific events to go exactly as planned to go right... any variable, even the slightest, can make it go wrong.
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Pfft... no way I'm THAT sappy. No, rest assured that won't happen.
2820168 good cause that is one less body i have to deal with
I have one thing to say to you, GODDAMN YOU!
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Oh no, what I have in store for him is much, MUCH better...
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Calling this fucking shit right now. Chrysabitch decided she wasn't going to hold her end of the bargain, and sent a changeling to the barracks. The changeling disguised as the lieutenant and "authorized" the shipping of thunderbird to cunterlot. Not sure of her motive though. Perhaps Ray told Chrysy to do so because he wanted thundy dead. No idea. But I am SO calling this, because of the fact that the lieutenant wouldn't have done it without Twi's permission, yet the guard claimed the lieutenant himself ordered it. Thundy is a good griffon, and wouldn't have driven the real lieutenant to so much rage as to cause him to commit such a rash decision without Twi's approval, either, so the "driven by rage" idea is pretty out of the question too. However, if Chrysy is doing this for Ray, then that means she probably allied with the griffons, which means Equestria is essentially buttfucked. CALLING
2831261 *slowclaps* congratulations, you figured it out, except, THE TOMATO SOUP, IS STILL IN THE MICROWAVE!!!!!!!!!!
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Normally I don't like confirming/denying speculations on upcoming chapters, but I'll tell you now that the described scenario won't happen, mainly because I have a hard time writing Chrysalis/changelings into my stories (it just feels like cheating when using them to infiltrate like that). No, I'm pretty sure the one chapter with Chrysalis and Cadence will be the only appearance for them in this story.
Holy...sh!t... It's been awhile but I fuqing loved it...
Yesh, this pleases me. You shal be spared.
CONTINUE THE RAPE ONSLAUGHT!
this is AWESOME!
twists and turns, twists and turns)
I hope Thunderbrid lives... But knowing stories like this... I really don't know... And fuck those guards. They may have just screw T-bird over.
"She spent all morning the next day begging to be let in to the barracks but the guards refused to change their minds."
What? So NOW they decide to contain the potentially dangerous griffin for interrogation!
Fleur's name is actually Fleur De Lis, not Fleur Dis Lee
Son of a bitch!! Stupid-ass guards! Ugh, they're going to cause the death of an innocent griffon! And this is supposed to be war, whatever happened to the, ya know, war? Or are we just in the beginning phases? Oh well, nearing the end of it now.
~SolidFire