Salvation for Dash! Yes! I think Luna definitely deserves her powers back after she brought Tank back to life.
Well, letting T-Bird live or die. Well, he truly DID save Fleur from captivity, but the griffons are at war with the ponies. Tough call for Twilight. If he lives, he should be placed under 24/7 surveillance it everything wire-tapped and cameras watching his every move to make sure he doesn't betray the ponies, That is, if he lies, according to Twilight.
Twists again. Damn, my heart was beating while reading through this. It's not like one of those things that you would expect the protagonist would win. You're a great author, sir. You managed to make your characters believable, and made the readers grown attached to it.
luna killed, what was it, hundreds of innocent griffons and changed the citizens outlook on the griffon race because of it, saving a tortoise should NOT be an instant justification, sure tank was important to RD, but what about the population of cantelot, they all think griffons are bad as there are no more refugees and they dont give two shits about tank, and frankly, neither do i.
So many threats towards Iron Rook... what did he do? Oh yeah, nevermind.
As for Thunderbird, there is now definitely a lot of mistrust in all griffons. I was going to do a poll on whether he is spared and accepted by the ponies or if the angry mob mindset kicks in, but I'm pretty sure we ALL know what people would vote... so it will be decided by a random number generator. Evens, he lives. Odds, he is imprisoned/executed/something else very bad and undeserving.
you sir, are an amazing writer, cant wait to see how the next chapter turns out! a mustache for you: (Thunderbird better live, or we will have problems)
I thought Thunderbird would be stuck in the back by a guards spear as he chased Iron. Yay! That didn't happen. Yet. That's the keyword when celebrating someone's survival/well being in this story.
Weelp, if one good thing came out of this chapter, it was that scumbag traitor Iron's swift death. Thank you, dear writer. I feel a lot better knowing he's dead. Not to mention Tank's revival, which made me happy again. But, then begs the question of what happens to the valiant Thunderbird?
I swear Spitfire, you're hornier than horny should be. I hope it's Soarin you're fucking... HA!!! Serves you right! Wow, never imagined myself being angry at Spitfire. And damn, I had hoped that Thunderbird would have gotten to be the one to deal the death blow to that scum. I wonder how he's going to be able to get out of this pile of shit he has found himself in. Damn straight Spitfire, a lot of this is your fault. You had better feel guilty. And yes, I feel that Luna, if not entirely redeeming herself, partially redeemed herself by risking her life for that of a tortoise.
great chapter. Especially since Iron Rook died
Salvation for Dash! Yes! I think Luna definitely deserves her powers back after she brought Tank back to life.
Well, letting T-Bird live or die. Well, he truly DID save Fleur from captivity, but the griffons are at war with the ponies. Tough call for Twilight. If he lives, he should be placed under 24/7 surveillance it everything wire-tapped and cameras watching his every move to make sure he doesn't betray the ponies, That is, if he lies, according to Twilight.
Nice chapter dude! Very well done!
I was hoping that Rainbow would somehow end up killing Iron...
Oh well. Maybe she'll still kill Captain Ray...
Twists again. Damn, my heart was beating while reading through this. It's not like one of those things that you would expect the protagonist would win. You're a great author, sir. You managed to make your characters believable, and made the readers grown attached to it.
And for that, have a follow.
Go go thunderbird... :D
Ok, that's too good... something is fishy to me.
luna killed, what was it, hundreds of innocent griffons and changed the citizens outlook on the griffon race because of it, saving a tortoise should NOT be an instant justification, sure tank was important to RD, but what about the population of cantelot, they all think griffons are bad as there are no more refugees and they dont give two shits about tank, and frankly, neither do i.
I'm glad that the Spitfire arc went where it went!
Awesome chapter!
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Well, there was kinda a Spitfire x Soarin scene... not really. Maybe next chapter?
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Was hoping someone would bring that up. Don't worry, her saving Tank is not the end of her guilt.
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Explain?
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So many threats towards Iron Rook... what did he do? Oh yeah, nevermind.
As for Thunderbird, there is now definitely a lot of mistrust in all griffons. I was going to do a poll on whether he is spared and accepted by the ponies or if the angry mob mindset kicks in, but I'm pretty sure we ALL know what people would vote... so it will be decided by a random number generator. Evens, he lives. Odds, he is imprisoned/executed/something else very bad and undeserving.
Want to know what his fate will be?
Guess you gotta wait for chapter 11!
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Well played good sir! 5/ 5
Alright
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Well, Iron died, Thunder and Tank lives, and Spitfire found somepony for herself... I just have a feeling that there is a shitstorm ahead
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*Gasp!* How could you think such a thing? When have I ever done anything like that?
...
Fack... looks like someone's catching on to my methods of madness.
2787858 choose and pray to the god of your choice you dont roll odds... dont make me get the topachula!
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Wooot! You save my Spitfire Soar in pairing. Thanks my friend!
"Also, yes, Iron is dead. Yes, I do realize I robbed Thunderbird the opportunity for revenge, but hey, that's war..."
...And war...War never changes...
2787830 My point was that she ended up with Soarin instead of the courier. Good.
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Well, his fate has been decided. Time to write it out...
2791091 SUSPENSE!!!!!!!!!!! s3.amazonaws.com/kym-assets/photos/images/original/000/168/391/48964%20-%203d%204th_wall%20animated%20derp%20duplicate%20gif%20nightmare_fuel%20pinkamena%20pinkamena_diane_pie%20pinkie_pie%20stare.gif?1314682665
you sir, are an amazing writer, cant wait to see how the next chapter turns out! a mustache for you:
(Thunderbird better live, or we will have problems)
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2800400 *loads revolver*
Darn, I was hoping that the entirety of their heart-to-heart would occur while his cock was in her ass.
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What better way to confess your love for someone than with your dick up her ass?
I thought Thunderbird would be stuck in the back by a guards spear as he chased Iron. Yay! That didn't happen. Yet. That's the keyword when celebrating someone's survival/well being in this story.
Also keep up this awesome work!
Wow! What a climax! And then some. Also... Yay Tank's back!
War HUH, what is good for? absolutely nothing, say it again! war, HUH. what is it good for absolutely nothin' say it again!
Weelp, if one good thing came out of this chapter, it was that scumbag traitor Iron's swift death. Thank you, dear writer. I feel a lot better knowing he's dead. Not to mention Tank's revival, which made me happy again. But, then begs the question of what happens to the valiant Thunderbird?
I swear Spitfire, you're hornier than horny should be. I hope it's Soarin you're fucking... HA!!! Serves you right! Wow, never imagined myself being angry at Spitfire. And damn, I had hoped that Thunderbird would have gotten to be the one to deal the death blow to that scum. I wonder how he's going to be able to get out of this pile of shit he has found himself in. Damn straight Spitfire, a lot of this is your fault. You had better feel guilty. And yes, I feel that Luna, if not entirely redeeming herself, partially redeemed herself by risking her life for that of a tortoise.
~SolidFire