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Alchemystudent


Loves to read and write, I decided to try writing fanfiction after a long hiatus thanks to ponies

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There is a secret in the Sparkle house, a tale of a monster that comes but once every winter. IT lies within the top floor of the house and within the room of the daughter of the house. This monster lives to eat and will stop at nothing to take its food from its chosen victims. Tonight, it is out, and tonight it has chosen its meal. BEWARE!

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That was a cute little story! :3

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Thanks, it had been in my head since winter

Ah a short but sweet story.

D'aaw. Kinda saw it coming, still cute.

cute story!

is "writing in his journal" supposed to be her journal? because it says writing about "her" day

". he poor creature bearly" should probably be "The poor creature barely"

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Yeah, its supposed to be her journal.. a tiny slip on my part

Awww, Twilight, you can be so adorable. What a sweet, lovely story. :pinkiehappy:

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Thank you, I was aiming for cuteness

How could you not like it? It's adorable!

Very cute :twilightsmile: I liked it.

My new favorite Filly Twilight Story. :eeyup:

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You're welcome, it was just tooooooo cute!

sorry this is late, but there is a mistake

an innocent bystander. The innocent young filly was just sitting there, writing in his journal about

Either the word filly or his is misplaced. Fillies are girls.

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*Bows respectfully* thank you, I try

I think this would be a good short episode bit. Not quite long enough to be its own episode. Very cute, very silly, and it has the right amount of Uberdramatics. Pinkie would be proud.

You bet I am!

See?

Barring the confusing line of action, this was cute as fuck.

This was a very short, but sweet and heartwarming story between the bond of both siblings and I thoroughly enjoyed it. :heart:

That was a pretty cute story. :heart:

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