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Twinkletail
I write poni. I am easily distracted. I like Oreos.
Twinkletail
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Not bad, but it feels more like a scene from a long story than a one-shot.
Yet another fluffy one...
Nice work with Twist.
~Skeeter The Lurker
Short, sweet, to the point and good characterization. Check it again for a couple of missed question marks or other punctuation. I'd be interested in seeing what happens next
Well there's a twist I didn't see coming. Going by the cover image I was positive this story was doing to be about Twist having a crush on Cherilee.
What would happen if Twist has a giant crush on Spike?
Yay! I finally have a good reason to do this:
Diamond Tiara is going to get her comeuppance.
This pleases me.
It says complete... this is like the tenth one shot story I have read lately that would be better off with more chapters.
psssst, that is your cue to write more chapters.
Short, but cute. Could use some more Twist, though.
Not bad, I knew from the lack of a romance tag that this couldn't be a ship fic. But by the end I found it kind of lacking in terms of story. Might I suggest extending this by a couple hundred words?
Cheerilee isn't that great a teacher. She lets DT and Silver Spoon get away with things all the time.
3356363 She doesn't LET them get away. It's a rule for teachers that," If I don't see it, I can't do anything." How often have you seen Diamond Tiara misbehave in front of her?
This is really good! The ending is hilarious!
Nice one-shot.
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You tricked me.
(I believed in a young crush, and you give me bulling!!!)
Well done.
~Leonzilla
I was expecting Twist to have a crush on Cheerilee.
Love it, and either way, crush or not, was still neat.
Short and cute with a unexpected ending. 1 like good sir/ma'am
Another sweet little snatch of life, and really real feeling in it. I love this
Is Twist to MLP as Butters is to South Park? She should be sweet and adorable, but she is hated or ignored. I like Twist...
Is she crushing Ms. Cheerilee?
She's a femLiam Neilson.
Again with Diamond Tiara. I was hoping for something more original. Oh well.
Well written and with excellent grammar. The read is rather simple, but I guess despite it's formulaic events, it did after all have a Twist in it.