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Good start, would definitely like to see where this goes.
A most delightful read, I must say. I too cannot wait to see where this goes. So, in the meantime, my well-written author, I leave you with this:
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... Spike's nuts for Applejack, I guess... Right?
2224570 "well-written"?
wow... thank you for the compliment... I didn't think I was that good...
and I'm starting on the next part, but who knows how long it will be.
2224594 I thought it was very well done. Interesting backstory that wasn't too bland or too complex, nicely-detailed character interaction that, once again, was neither too complex or too bland: all in all, a good blend of everything.
Take your time: I have no need for encouraging an author to shorten or speed up the writing process. Lengthwise, whatever: as long as it feels right to you, it'll be fine for me.
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wow... thank you... and I was just talking about how long it will be until I post another chapter (well, give it to my editor... you know what I mean)
Good structure looking forward to more...
btw
wassup with that?
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dang that's one sharp eye! and I would guess it's from the auto-correct spelling function thing my editor was using... but at least it was a small error and I'll go fix it now
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A pleasure to help any way, any time mine freund.
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und ich bin immer offen, sie zu empfangen, mein Freund
at least I think that's right... my german is a bit rusty
2224903
You did it right
OHOHO!
WHAT IS THIS?
THAT'S WHAT IT IS!
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Dude if this keeps up you're gonna be featured... which means I can finally do this
inb4 featured!!
*Does a lil jig out the back door*
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1) prehensile? um... in that context, I guess it's supposed to be either 'possible' or 'a picture of the situation before the story began'... but the word 'prehensile' is defined as "a limb or appendage with the capability of grasping"
2) I know they are 'digits', but the average laymen is more used to the term 'finger', so I used that because I would get a lot less resistance, and the whole thumb argument was a little joke (like the line "beef and broccoli")
3) what's a "bru"?
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1) oh... you meant "thumb" meaning the "pollex" (or "digitus primus" or "digit with only two phalanges")... I thought you meant "thumb" to be an abbreviation for 'thumbnail'... I'm sorry for the confusion
2) yeah, I kept laughing every time I reread it... "...the bare and juicy, sweet and savory, beef and broccoli..." LOL
3) ok... I get it now...
Nice clop you have there. Sssshhhame is something were to.. sexually happen to it. (Please continue writing!)
Nice job writing BTW.
I'm drooling, i always liked AJ, and the new episodes sure gave fuel to this shipping.
A very golden rule of story telling is to never break the flow of a story unless you have to, and that is even more true for a clop/mature sex story like this. When you put this into your story "(you really want to argue the 4 fingers and thumb stuff? really?)" does you really kill the flow. Not only is it something in brackets, but also talking to us readers as if you want a discussion, those two things does not mix when you want the reader to follow the flow
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and why does everything have to be so serious? if I hadn't placed that there I would be receiving plenty of people complaining anyway, just as you are now, about the fact that people have four fingers and a thumb... but at least you didn't complain about the other joke line I placed in there
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That is because I stopped reading the story because you dialogue wasn´t written very well.
And while what you say is true, that not all stories need to be serious all the time, but if you aim after a story with sex in it should you at least take it serious and try to write something that don´t break the flow.
Because people that want to read a story about AJ´s breasts would normally not want the flow to break, especially not when the hand land on the breast at long last
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and to that, I will only say this: it is only at the very start, and nothing else of its kind occurs after it (unless you count the other joke line at the end)
Only thing dat bugs me is the sentences in two thirds of it don't start with capital letters... aside from dat, it was good.
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Um... which sentences? The closest things I could find were either continuations after ellipses, or 'false' sentences where the 'period' is actually a comma.
2227798 I dunno, only the parts where they're speaking I guess, maybe there's no right or wrong way to write conversations, not a writer myself obviously. Not a huge issue, I guess, just bugged me a bit.
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well... if you're talking about the places like
that's actually what an ellipsis is used for: to indicate an intentional omission of a word, sentence, or whole section from the text.
and in this quote, it's basically to express when he's laughing during his reply to her, rather than the whole sentence in one go
2228071 Nope, talking about places like this;
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oh... you're talking about the capitalization of quotations. I'm not the type to capitalize when it begins a quotation, only at the beginning of a sentence. if you notice, the lead-in to that quote is:
indicating that the statement was directly following and in direct result of her action, jumping up in surprise and seeing Spike
you understand now?
Bloody Brilliant!
Today Is A Good Day.
Well uh, I don't really read clopfics...
But this is an AppleSpike story, which I actually quite like. (Considering they're two of my least favourite characters. >>)
I might just take a look at this later on, maybe a change of pace will get my own creative juices flowing.
2228162 I'm not trying to be rude here but, (i'm just gonna be blunt here cuz I'm not too good with words) it looks like shit when half the "quotations" are capitalized and the other half aint. Now the story is good, but that'd probably... improve the reading experience, probably, just... take my advice with a grain of salt.
2240935 and why do you think I put the source of the picture but to give credit to him?
I enjoyed this story. Please make another chapter soon.
Please make another chapter
Yeah... I'm gonna need more of this...because reasons
Love it so far! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Please update this story! I want to see where this goes!
Wonderful story, and I love how you handled the clop, it was hot and tasteful, least to me it was
Update now! We the people demand more!
sequel! the masses demand a sequel!
great story
rating: 5/5 panzers
Must follow next chapter please
I love it *_* I NEED MAWR I SAY MOREEEE
You need to make a sequel
What's this?
reads fic
Damn. Yo, Regee! Give this one a read!
Regee: "Sure thing!... Damn! We need to show this to the guys."
a half an hour later...
Everyone's reaction.
wait, there is another chapter coming?