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DVB


A Hispanic nerd with a few stories in mind. Haven't written much in a while so enjoy my stories. Review them and tell me what you think of them.

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A one-shot dedicated to the latest episode and one of my favorite authors. This is a AppleSpike oneshot.

"The apple of my eye- Something, but usually someone, that one cherishes above all others"

Spike realizes who the apple of his eye is.

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Comments ( 22 )

Who's the author that you're tributing this to?

DVB
DVB #2 · Jan 2nd, 2013 · · ·

1892993 MallaJong1 He is the one who does the Spike's <insert mare's name here> series. Most famously, Spike's Rainbow Dash

DAAWWWWW!!!! favd! :rainbowkiss:

I love it but don,t you think you can maybe expand on this like make more chapters this great but it could have some more to it. Because applespike is my fav ship but there isn't that many of them also i,m adding this to my favs.:pinkiehappy:

You know, Spike being a klutz was pretty much the only thing I didn't like about the episode, and this is a pretty good explanation of why he was the way he was. I prefer this to "he was just nervous and so eager to please Applejack" so I guess this is the truth of the matter.

deserves more...

needs an update. you leave it off on so much potential. so many good fanfics fall to this

That was nice and sweet, good job.:moustache::ajsmug:

I agree with the comments below this would make a great series!:pinkiehappy:
But that is up to you o wise and talented author.

Okay, I must say I like this fic. The characters in it were portrayed very well and the scenes were very cute.
However, what irks me about this story was I felt it was very bare bones in detail and I personally felt that the romance escalated a bit too quickly.
Overall, a good fic. You get a like and a thumbs-up from Jesus.

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A bit surprised when I saw this in my inbox given as how uncommon this paring is, but as Admin of the the AppleSpike group I had to give it a shot. Now I haven't seen the episode, maybe it was due to some of the reviews I've read or lack of time on my part, but I got enough of the jist of it from the wiki. Your explanation to why Spike acted the way he did makes sense in a way, which I like. you did good on this. Yeah the hooking up was a bit fast but this is a one-shot and one could see the episode as the previous "chapters" of the story.

This was a great tale and that there should be a sequel to this story. At least having them telling their friends and family members about their new relationship.:ajsmug:


Still good work for a one shot tale.:moustache:

That was wonderful. I enjoyed reading the story. just the right amount of pause and internal thinking to help both to find their feelings, and the added physical contact and the final straw or in this case hat to help it all come out to its lovely and warm ending.

AL
AL #14 · Mar 2nd, 2013 · · 1 ·

woooooooow excellente fic :DD !!! mmm i would like to see a sequel it will be awesome !!!! :twilightsmile:

Ohh...yeah.
:moustache::heart::ajsmug: This couple gives Sparity a run for their money.
If Spike fooled more around other ponies in the actual show, this Couple would be the fans favorite.

:ajsmug: YEE-HAAAHH!!! Now THAT'S more like it!

:moustache: Really Applejack... you don't need to...

:applejackunsure: Ah! Don't worry sugarcube! That's AAAALLL OK!

Me: Yeah right... Beautiful Story BTW!

:twilightsmile: Very Good

Me: :facehoof:

Awwwwwwwwwwwesome :pinkiecrazy:

Plz say there is more of this?????????

This was great. But, it is one of my top three Spike ships. So, of course I'd enjoy it. Also helps that it was well written.

This is so cute! I love Applespike :rainbowkiss:

I loved that! A bit rushed, but cute all the same!

Wow, that was a sweet fanfic. I wish you could do more. :ajsmug: :moustache:

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