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The Dragon Warlock


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You never shipped Rarity with others so I'm okay, and we have some AppleSpike. And it's clop, too. Decent clop.

Good job for satisfying me 100%.

no homo

wait,
>Spike X Elusive
DO IT. I'll be fine with FutatyxSpike as well or hell, even if you r63 both of them. Or stick with the yaoi. JUST DO IT.

In B4 Featured.

Loved the read man! there's not enough AppleSpike around. :ajsmug::moustache:

Ah AppleSpike, the balm to my soul. And now I have a boner...:twilightblush:

Best wishes my good writer, best wishes!

1517058 I'm glad you enjoyed the story. :twilightsmile:
1517065 We'll see what happens in the future. :rainbowdetermined2:
1517086 I need more views! I need them to be featured! :flutterrage:
1517092 Glad you liked it! :ajsmug:

1517213 you should totally let me preread if you do write it. ('o_o)

I didn't think Applejack was the type that liked to take it in the back roads (if you know what i mean):ajsmug:

And to Spike, good on ya mate:moustache:

*In b4 featured.* This story was satisfying.:moustache:

The romance was a bit forced, but you did explaine wherer did it come from, so it wasn´t out of the blue. Overall this is a great story. Specially the ending. :rainbowlaugh:Though I can't stop wondering: Was this Applejacks first time?

Who the hell is Elusive? And why I have the feeling I'm going to regret that I asked?

1517222 I'll keep you in mind in the future. After all, you are a very good Sparity writer.
1517506 That's Applejack for ya. She's not afraid to try something like that.
1517981 I doubt it will get featured, but it would be nice.
1518122 I didn't want to drag out the story too much to be honest. I found I kind of dragged things along and made the story longer than what it should be. I'm still glad you enjoyed the story overall and thought it was still good. And to answer your question, yes this was Applejack's first time.
1518192 Elusive is the Rule 63 version of Rarity.

1518253 So it was Applejack's first time? Sweetness. Is that the real reason she didn't want to pop her cherry, or did she really not wanna get pregnant?

AND YES, recognized for Sparity. Still no Path_of_Cloud, but... ah well.

1518261 If you look in the story, she said she didn't want her seed fertilized. So yeah, she didn't want to get pregnant. Path_of_Cloud may not pay attention to this story because of the lack of Sparity. But who knows? Maybe he's busy and has no time to read it for now, or just isn't that crazy for AppleSpike.

1518253
Thank you for the quick answer. Yes your story is indeed good. In many one shots the characters fall in love out of the f#!8ng blue, or worst, they just get laid for no reason at all. You did a great job on both sides.
Yes I knew I would regret asking the second question. :facehoof:

1518304 by "still no Path_of_Cloud," I meant that I like writing Sparity, but I'm not at Path_of_Cloud's skill level.

1517058

ALL OF THE HOMO!

Props to whoever knows what I'm referencing. If not, IGNORE ME!

1518329 Your welcome. I try not to do stuff like that, it makes the story feel empty and kind of seems a little blatant.
Now like I said, if I do the Elusive X Spike story, Spike would be on top through most of the story.
1518368 Ah okay then. If it's any consolation, I don't think I'm at his level at all either. He knows what he's doing with Sparity.
1518671 Bonds Beyond Time: Abridged, correct?

1518671 I don't now what you're referencing, but it better not involve a man named Yusei Fudo who plays card games on a motorcycle and states the said quote in an abridged adaptation of a feature anime film to another man named Yugi Mutoh. ('¤_¤)

1518756 I do too, but I'm definitely not perfect.

1518853 well, I'm far from being satisfactory. ('o_e)

clopfic
6969 words

HUEHUEHUE

Oh, and by the way, moustache and a like.

:moustache:

1517213 Hmm.... hidden waterhole, near the town, but nearly no one visits it? Why does this sound like that humanized Twist x Snips and Snails clop? :derpytongue2:

1518875 I am too.
1518880 I intentionally aimed for that word amount. Glad you loved it! :ajsmug:
1519087 To be honest, I barely remember that story but you do have a point with how it's almost similar. Nobody in town knows about Spike and Applejack's hidden areas. This story wasn't meant to rip off that one at all. I wanted to take something like a waterhole and do my own version of it.

1519148

Nobody in town knows about Spike and Applejack's hidden areas.

.....
........ :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

I guess that's because they're always whereing clothes, right?! ::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Sorry, couldn't help it. facehoof: :pinkiehappy:

1519178 Okay, I have to admit that made me smile. In all seriousness though, nobody else has any idea about their hidden swimming areas.

1519197 ... I'm still giggling, but I can't find any way to make that one dirty. Unless Spike uses his dick to swim, like a dragon would use its tail as a rudder.

But in all seriousness, I understand, and I'd like to find that other fic and read them side-by-side, if only to compare/contrast the two, and maybe riff the two of them.

1519148 it was for me.I also wouldn't mind a continuation of this story. :3

1519212 So technically my fic is MST3K material? Wow, that's new for me. :rainbowderp:
1519253 I don't think I'll do a sequel. The last time I tried to do a sequel to my AppleSpike story, I gave up on it. I want this to be nothing more than a one shot and a make up for me not continuing Mending the Heart.

1519714 Well, I dunno if it's MPPT3K material or not. I'm not saying it's bad, if that's what you're asking. It's quite good, and RatherHomely does ALL fics, not JUST shitfics and trollfics. Hell, he did Not My Destiny and Study Buddies.

1519733 Somehow I doubt I'll get his attention. I'm not that famous.

1519741 He's also on Hiatus atm. I'm a riffer, though. :twilightsmile: I've done at least two guest riffs, one beside Mule.

Also, he does them by request. Not whether they're "worthy" or not.

1519744 Oh I know my story is going to get riffed with the bad grammar and all the shipping I did at the end of the story.

1519714
A lot of people I know seem to stop on longfics. ('o_o) I think I'm one of the few authors that will persist with a story (48,000 cut words and a year later, and I'm still working on my primary story). I dunno if I'm stubborn, stupid, or persistent, but it's such a rarity to see people complete stories for long.

1519770 Wanna see a fic that is truly terrible, that I helped create? Trust me, it was painful, and I just helped him get over the 1000 word minimum.

Trust me. This fic is terrible.

1519776 What primary story?
1519844 I'll take a look at it later.

1519859 The Story of the Apple Spectrum. Originally 95,000 words (on last update), and I cut 48,000 words off. I started this fic on October 31st, 2011. To say I'm persistent is a bit of an understatement.

1518671 Well I would say that quote took the cake.

And probably ate it to.

1519875 Jesus! A word of advice to you. Don't drag a story for so long, you no longer have any fun with it and get sick of doing so. I'd say just wrap it up at 50,000 words and just end it.

1519905 I'm still having fun with the story. :< I enjoy long stories; they keep others entertained for a while and as well as provide a decent story. It allows me the freedom to flesh out a full plot as well as an entire world and system. I am a fan of longfics. :3

I have to say this was very well written
I'm not a fan of clopfics myself but I actually like this one a bit
Most clopfics out there have no storyline to them and rush along to sex
This one actually had a interesting twist to it and you can really feel the bond between them
Great job!

I CAME!!! SO HARD!!!
P.S. WHY ANAL DAMMIT.
P.S.II. Also, check for errors. I'm too high to help you check those out fer ya now. Peace!

1520172 Well I'm just saying is all. Hope you won't forget the Sparity story you're working on.
1520524 Thank you very much. I did try to make this clop fic good and am glad to see others satisfied. :twilightsmile:
1520810 Why anal? Why not?
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Spike on top :rainbowlaugh: Seriously though, good work :twilightsmile:

Your more than welcome! It was a great fic, and I was glad I was able to help you get it out here! :pinkiehappy:


Even if life delayed me a bit :twilightblush:

1521061 Oh, I won't. I would totally love suggestions on what to write, though. Anything and everything to help, and all that jazz.

1523199 It's alright. Life happens. Thank you again. :twilightsmile:
1523300 Anything kinky or something along those lines?

1523336 Anything. Anything having to do with fetishes, common problems in a relationship, strengthening a relationship, things to do with mistrust, and whatnot. Things you deal with in a mature relationship.

1523344 Well I remember you saying earlier something about making both Spike and Rarity Rule 63'd. So why not that? Or maybe some pegging. I got some weird things in my mind.

1523431 rule 63 I was contemplating, but I think it's too early for that. I also didn't wanna challenge others if they were planning on it for the moment.

BUT ANYWAYS, list anything. I'm completely chill.

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