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Definitely reading this soon, but now as I think about it...

All I can think of with FlutterSpike is the infamous fanfic... FRIENDSHIP IS SEXY. O_O

*shoots self*

I'll take a look at this later. This seems very promising.

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Thanks, I hope you enjoy it :twilightsmile:

Very impressed with this story! I had a very hard time tearing myself away just to eat. Please, don't ever stop writing, because I will forever love your work!:pinkiehappy:

Very good, nice indeed. Wonder how many will ask about a sequel?

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Wow! Thank you so much! In just a few short moments I am going over to watch you :twilightsmile:

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Thank you for reading? Dp you believe a sequel needs to be written?

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Well, you have good writing skills! You need to make more stories! More of them! Good writers are hard to come by but you're one of them. Know how to keep a smooth plot going, actually have events that makes sense etc. So yeah, wy not?

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Your words mean a lot to me, thank you so much! I'll add this to my list right away and will begin work on it as soon as I possibly can :twilightsmile:

Hm, the only thing I would suggest is a little more build up. I suppose I am a fan of good sexy stories when the time between the telling them they like each other, to the conclusion, is drawn out, and the emotions are displayed ever so subtlely.

Hehe...maybe it is just me. I did like the story, as I love Spike and Fluttershy, so both of them together makes me happy. I just hope Spike will be able to care for his Kirin foal when Fluttershy does get pregnant...=p

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Thanks for pointing all of that out. If you'll read the description, you'll see that this was an earlier work of writing where I was VERY inexperienced. Regardless though, I'm glad you enjoyed it! And let's hope that child support doesn't exist in Equestria :rainbowderp:, then Spike can just run for the hills.

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No problem, merely wished to help =p

Hmm, I think Spike is too honorable for that!

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And help you did :twilightsmile:

Still though, everypony's gotta have a plan B :raritywink:

...uh, no birth control pun intended there :P

Alright, prepare for some criticism.

One, I think it was actually your very first story, either that or the second, since I know Rarity's Love came after it. Two, I have no actual criticism, and I love you. Kudos to you for doing possibly the only Fluttershy x Spike clop at the time of its original release. Finally, I want to know why you trust me so much when it comes to your stories? It just seems a little silly, since I think your stories are better than mine, yet mine somehow get more views and likes and such. :twilightblush:

EDIT: I should have more views, but I re-did my entire story by deleting the chapters, and using my hard copies to merge them into bigger ones, so as a result I only have a little over 100 views as opposed to over 1000. And it also seems that while your older stories don't have as many likes as my story, they have far more views, which I believe they deserve, since I already stated I believe your writing skill surpasses mine.

1445842 Hey, don't you forget about the sequels to Late Nights With Luna and Rarity's Romance you promised me! :rainbowlaugh:

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Keep in mind that you are not the only one I call upon to look over previews of an upcoming story (as you can very well see with that blog post). The answer to that question would simply be that I've "known" you and talked to you enough here on Fimfiction to see that you have experience with writing and that you haven't done anyone wrong (spreading something when they said not to, throwing complete dirt on it, etc.), so that is why you are one of the quote-on-quote, what I like to call, "Big Three". You three are who I tend to turn to when it comes to the handling and over viewing of my stories. I don't really know how this factors into it, but if you work in my profession with an education like mine (I not only have an Engineering degree but also a Business degree in case something happens) you learn really quick and get an eye for who's trustworthy and who isn't. ALSO keep in mind that the statement I just made, it has nothing to do with my watchers at all, the reason they don't often get things is because of a lack of conversation between us.

For the second part, I don't think I can quite answer that with one simple statement. I think this one has multiple answers. To start off, I think that I am a flawed writer. While I'm confident about it and do like the slow pace to "fame" (for lack of a better word) I'm going at, I don't think that my writing is anywhere near as good as yours. I also think its more of a promotion thing for me, a location scheme if you will, but I don't really have people promoting the stories. Whether it be someone on Tumblr saying they should come check out my stories or a full-blown Facebook page, I have none of those. Lastly, I think it's a popularity issue. You've been here a lot longer than I have, and as such, you've earned the trust of some of those who might have read your work, liked it, but didn't follow early on. So in a nutshell, popularity, demand, and quality.

A good story and a sequal would be awesome. Maybe where one of their friends discovers their relationship? Perhaps Pinkie, she would most likely be the one to react best to the news as she doesn't care as long they are happy. :pinkiehappy:

Great Story.

You should add a chapter where twilight comes to check on spike and accidentaly walks in on an... "Awkward situation" :twilightoops:

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Thank you both very much for your interest! I'm glad you enjoyed it :twilightsmile:. I do have a sequel planned, but you'll just have to look out for it to see what will happen :raritywink:

:fluttercry: Ah love this story already....

This was very good, I liked it very much. Only complaint I have is that not much happened besides them being with eachother, but it was still very enjoyable, and I need moar! :flutterrage:

1445717 with you talent you could make a book larger than a harry potter with just this! id love to see a sequel! The Vongola Family approves!

Thumb and fav'd. This single chapter tells me that I will very much definitely LOVE this whole thing.

I'd recommend that you merge chapters 2 and 3. They would fit better if read as a whole. :raritywink:

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Rest assured, you'll get a sequel :twilightsmile:

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Thank you for the advice :twilightsmile: I may just look into doing that. Oh, and thanks for watching me :twilightsmile:

As soon as I get home from work, I need to send you a message. It asks if you would like to join something which concerns these stories :raritywink:

I found this to be a very engaging story with nice characterization and a very pleasant atmosphere throughout. The pacing was agreeable and the overall plot good enough to keep me reading. Something I did notice though that might not have been intentional was a sort of animosity that spike seemes to have for the other mane 6, Twilight Sparkle especially. It was not overly apperent or anything it just seemed that way through your choice of wording. Overall a great read and a good clop. Definatly worth a review!

Never thought Flutterhy and Spike would go at it :yay:
goos story :moustache:

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Hey, it happens :raritywink: I'm glad you liked it!

Comment posted by Discontinued deleted Oct 5th, 2013

:heart::heart::heart::heart::heart:Amazing work!!!!! Love it!!!! Romantic=this story!!!!!!:heart::heart::heart::heart::heart:

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Thank you very much! I'm glad you like it so much :heart:

1554066 I did!! Keep up the awesome work!!!!

Normally, I don't like to see Spike shipped with anyone other than Rarity, but that's because they usually do such a crappy job at it.

You on the other hand wrote a great piece of art. Magnificent. I applaud you.

Then, she worked from his lips and went from his neck and then worked lower and lower and lower…
"SPIKE!" Then Twilight busted the door got on the floor then everypony walked the dinosaur.

Oh why can't this happen to me!!!!!!!
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you know you can edit your own comment right?

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oh never saw that haha :twilightblush:

Fluttershy and Spike? Liked, favorited, now time to read.

A year later Spike became the father of a healthy foal hybrid. :moustache::yay:
This was fun to read. :twilightsmile:

My chest... hurts... to much dawwwwwwwww!:heart::heart::heart:

And also, Is there such thing as silver onyx?

A little fast paced but still earns a :eeyup:

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Yes actually. I gave my girlfriend something similar, so that is where the inspiration for that whole scene stemmed from. By definition, Onyx is "a semiprecious variety of agate with different colors in layers". So it is not always black, though that is certainly the most common color for it.

you sir are my new favorite author on this site, oh and im not suggesting you make a whole other story but could you make maybe 1 or 2 more chapters where twilight finds out? not saying you do it right now sense i know your working on your other stories but maybe when you find time

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Yes sir! A sequel is in the making right now with just that! Not just extra chapters either, a better and longer sequel! :twilightsmile:

Wow....talk about romantic, though a bit rushed and long with the sentences, and it's aFlutter Spike so it has my full attention, all in all a 7/10, great job:twilightsmile: Shall read on:yay:

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