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Motion Reflux


Likened to write stories leaning towards depression. Not rather good at anything else. But yoooooooooooo I like writing random things anyways, even if they suck!

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"The world is changing with the glaces cast between the eyes of many. I've only known this much through the stories from my friends... my friends who helped..." This is the story of Motion Reflux, a special pegasus with a unique sensitivity to the ripples of motion against the ground, as he travels from Equestria to the outskirts and comes across the city of Skyfell. Skyfell, a city of technology that has disbanded and disconnected from the reaches of Equestria, ruled by a pegasus princess named Snowfall which technology grants her the powers of a unicorn combined with her natural pegasus abilities. Our protagonist gains new relationships, meets unique ponies and helps himself in the process. Many glace at him, most spit at him, others wave and little say a word; this town is plagued with distrust and illusions caused by unfruitful emotions. The Elements of Order... they call it, will save them... but 'who' and 'what' are these Elements?... one proclaims it keeps The Elements of Harmony in balance, another says that the elements control aspects of ponykind... but who knows..?

"A Friendship is like ones soul as it can never be taken or lost, but roams in search for longing."
"A lost memory isn't as a roaming idea, it follows but can never achieve but can always strive for greater glory."

Chapters (13)
Comments ( 2 )

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Well shit, a story idea that actually seems interesting and original with what appears to be a rather competent writing style looking at the description. There seemed to be a few minor errors, so if you could find yourself a proofreader this could get interesting.

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Thanks for the comment, I'll be sure to re-read and get some others to read it through. I'm not all around the best at writing and neither is my grammar fantastic though but I've saved up a re-write in that there chapter and tried fixing any mistakes (hopefully I didn't make more).

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