A dark blue pegasus whom was cursed in the left eye with power unimaginable at the cost of her memories, of her sight of the future and forever thrown into a road unknown is finally freed from that trap for several grueling days.
Being defeated by the Elements of Harmony during a immense battle occuring near Canterlot, she is taken as a pseudo-prisoner to Ponyville as the main six try to rehabilitate her and help her retrieve her memories.
Will their stories and their help truly make her remember her own past?
Will being around them help her feel truly at peace?
Will seeing sky blue answer her long awaited questions?
Or will those seven days run up and the curse finally overwhelm her whole form.
A dark blue pegasus whom was cursed, was also partially saved by being turned into a robotic form. A form programmed to destroy Princess Celestia... but that form was mostly destroyed in the battle. Who's to say she won't turn against them once more?
A living being in both body and soul cannot be judgeth
Until their final breath draws
Then their accursed physical form shall be burneth
Their memories a blur
And may they be erased
Forever forgotten
May they be left on a path of the unknown
And forever within a realm of their own...
I'm am intrigued.
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Honestly - and I mean this in the most positive way - I wouldn't submit this to EqD. First off, they have a pretty strict no/little OCs policy, and the main character in this is an OC. Secondly, the grammar, occasional spelling mistakes and your use of asterisks ( * ) around actions instead of writing them out would earn you a strike without a doubt. It would be worth finding an editor who would help you revise your sentence structure if you'd like to submit it in the future.
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Yeah, I figured as much! Either way maybe I'll get some help later in the future for proof-reading and editing because those two things are my weak-suits. Thanks for the constructive comment though!