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The Music Man


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Fluttershy meets a ghost that needs her help to resolve a tumultuous past. Normally, Fluttershy wouldn't mind giving a hoof to a poor soul, but does the soul want a hoof, or everything behind it? She seeks help from Zecora, and (to her surprise) Rarity. In the end, Fluttershy must decide what the spirit really wants. And she will have to stand up for that decision.

Cover Art: HorseJess

Editors thus far: Georg, blawrg, DJPsychOH

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 8 )

A well-written start! Ion is so heavily over-acting his woe-is-me damned soul role I could tell he was up to something even without the smirk. And the little cuts Fluttershy got are quite suitably creepy too. Definitely looking forward to more of this one. :)

I can't wait to read more!! :pinkiehappy:

Take my like! For I like this.

Those ghosts are dangerous.

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Three reads, two editors, and I still manage to screw up the grammar :facehoof:.

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Hey thanks. I like to know that someone enjoyed my story.

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