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The Monster in Celestia

VX is an experimental pony weapon. Hackmid comes from a war-torn griffon tribe.

~~And together they fight crime!~~

And together they rip ponies to shreds!

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An A10 Warthog

An A10 Warthog #1 · Aug 19th, 2013 · 2 · ·

VX

Alright, that's it. I'm going to call the UN.

CreepyPastaPrincessLuna

CreepyPastaPrincessLuna #2 · Aug 19th, 2013 · · ·

Well, it is interesting. Definatly a new, interesting idea. Ehat I would like is some more backstory to Hackmid and Slendy. It seems that a griffon escapes with Slendy. Hackmid's dad is locked up and his mom is dead. How was she killed, and how was he captured? I also want more of a reason Celestia is up to these things. I know money drive people to do crazy things, but what is driving Celestia to so such things? How much money is involed? How is it that nopony like Twilight or Luna have no clue about the "All for bits and none for anyone else" type thing. If Twilight or Luna knew all about this, would they try to create peace? I will be looking forward to reading the finished story.
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