Jason knew he was different from the other kids in school, but he didn't know that he was that different.
In this story a prophesy states that Jason Wood, a human, is the only one that can defeat the Jabberwock, the destroyer of worlds. Is this prophesy true? How come a TV show called "My Little Pony Freindship Is Magic" doesn't exist in Jason's world, except for in his imagination? Will he defeat the Jabberwock?
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How come no comments?
blushies!!!! 
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I want to know if there's anything some ponies can tell me to make my storie better plz.
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I DUNNO!!!!!!!!!!!
I was just about to hit the dislike until I got to the part with the doctor so I'll let the quality of the story pass this time
Oh dear lord, a prophecy.
Well, I guess I'll give it a chance. Just know that my expectations aren't very high going into this.
EDIT: Prophesy is the action of making a prophecy. Just so you know.
Well, umm... It could certainly use improvement.
Just, read this.
And this.
And just for good measure, this.
Keep practicing and learning, and someday I'm sure you'll be a great writer!
-RisingOne
2095484 I think that your plot line is good.
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But the story seems a bit rushed. A lot has happened in 2 short chapters!
You may want to slow down bit! (For us to understand what's going on!
Ah! Too many thing happen in too short of a chapter!
This whole introduction is really, really rushed. Also, why 12, why not make him 16, or something? I think that's the minimum age of the Mane Six.....
I chose 12 years old because in the next two chapters something big is gonna happen. Oh and by the way in this story the Mane 6 are 20 years old.
Actually, the mane 6 are 16 years old. Sorry.