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Edwin Shell is a human come to Equestria after his violent, early demise. He wakes up in a strange land in an even stranger body, finding colorful creatures that call themselves "ponies". He soon finds himself in a centuries standing power struggle between the Numbereds, the ancient race that has guarded Equestria since time immemorial, and the Angelics, who are countless and seek total annihilation of civilized life. Can Edwin find a way into this strange world, or will he be killed before he has a chance?

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Comments ( 376 )

♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪

♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪

i only liked the beginning, but its.....nice :twilightsheepish:

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i know not what you mean by that.

And of course this gets uploaded right before i go to bed. Confound these cliffhangers! Really enjoying the story so far though, keep it up!

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thank you. I appreciate any feedback that I can get.

Confound these cliffhangers!

♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪

♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪

4011 Except Derpy and G1 Applejack aren't stoners. Well, Derpy might be...

This is becoming quite an interesting story!

7036 I do try my hardest, my dear brony. I must say that what I have coming makes what has come look like nothing.

Finally Bullestia took what she deserve, sometimes i think that a stallion should give her "THE NIGHT" and finally shut her up.:flutterrage:
I really want to see those two together, make them happy (or pay the consequences:pinkiecrazy:)

7853 I had no idea that I included one.

Uhhh...Bad, bad writer. No, bad writer! You don't just make ponified human fall for a pony right AFTER they are ponified. They will be too attached to human figure to find a pony attractive!...Unless, of course, if you do that with a ver perverted brony. *Shudders*

9387 Not exactly his own decision, now was it? Besides, I think tjat edwin had already consoled himself with the fact that he could never leave equestria, so I thonk that edwin simply trying to intigrate himself in his new home.9629 also, edwin was never attracted to fluttershy. Their relationship is purely platonic.

Confound these stories I find that already have X Number of chapters already completed! :trixieshiftleft:

I shall read through them anyway!!!! :rainbowdetermined2:

10663 I SALUTE THEE, BRONY!

the first few kinda suck, but i'm working on them.

10672 I can't wait for the next chapters to come out! :yay:

also, for some stange reason, some parts of the story made me think of the song: Don't Fear the Reaper by Blue Oyster Cult. :applejackunsure:

This is possibly ONE OF THE BEST stories I have ever read in terms of MLP: FiM Fanfiction. :pinkiehappy:

I give you Kudos and +100 internets :yay:

10971 It was the moonstone part, right? re-read "of Venom and Thunder", It explains it near the end.

why are half the I caped and half are not?

ok im not tring to be rude, but please get a prereader or something. "I think" is not a sentence.

Or longknives and sunsets

Is that a refrence to Hitlers Night of the longknives, where he was killing off Gestapo? :applejackunsure:

Or just the actual knife, since he was stabbed?

12582 of long Lives and sunsets. I cannot accept any responsibility for any misconstrued meanings or misread words, but an interesting take on it.

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AAAAAHHHHHHHH!

Didn't see that L there. :ajsleepy:

I just thought that because someone higher up was killing off an someone under him. :applejackunsure:

12749 Well, Antony isn't even in the same system as Othello. Othello is a Numbered and is his own authority, while Antony is beholden to Celestia, being a guard. Makes somewhat of a complicated situation for Edwin.

just have read youre 55255 words novel and well...i loe it hope to see more part and becous this is a awesome story i will print it adn make a book out of it so i can read it every day when i go to bed so keep the suff coming

:pinkiecrazy: Awesomely epic and fitting.

o_o again a aweosme part mate hope to se e the next one soon....:rainbowdetermined2:
hope you enjoy youre story as much as i do

you do know that the nether is a place in minecraft right

14946 Yes. I tried to avoid the use of that word to describe it, and I did not want to use the word "Void", either. Nether just kind of stuck for me.

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You do know that the 'nether' is a word stemming from mythology and 'minecraft' has about as much right to 'claim' it as a dead fly?

'Nether' meaning 'nothing'

I just read this, and all I have to say is..WOW! No other words can describe.:ajbemused::ajsleepy::ajsmug::applecry::applejackconfused::applejackunsure::coolphoto::derpyderp1::heart::fluttershysad::fluttershyouch::fluttershbad::flutterrage::fluttercry::derpytongue2::derpyderp2::pinkiecrazy::pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy::pinkiesad2::pinkiesick::pinkiesmile::rainbowderp::rainbowdetermined2::raritywink::raritystarry::raritydespair::raritycry::rainbowwild::rainbowlaugh::rainbowkiss::rainbowhuh::scootangel::trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright::twilightangry2::twilightblush::twilightoops::twilightsheepish::twilightsmile::twistnerd::unsuresweetie::yay::trollestia::moustache::facehoof::eeyup::duck:

♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪

I was wondering the same thing. It says this is a crossover. From what series? Doctor Who, I imagine?

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