• Member Since 13th Aug, 2011
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jroddie


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Albert leads a normal, boring life. He meets a strange man who claims to be a writer, with nigh supreme power over Albert's world. All the writer needs to do is write something down on paper and it happens. So what happens when the Writer asks for help Albert's life story?

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 3 )

Very, very interesting premise.
I'll keep an eye on this.

To me, this has always been an interesting concept. The creator meeting its creation, basically playing "God" with its life and everything within it.

I think you're doing a pretty good job but I feel with these two short chapters leave little room for development. Character-wise or plot-wise.

All in all, :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache: . 5 Mustaches.

Hmm I guess you should take this like :heart: :unsuresweetie:

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