Apparently, I wasn't the first human to walk the face of Equestria. In fact, there were a million before me. But for a different purpose, they existed. And to resolve their problems and the past of their creator, I was brought into this world. There was no time for rejoicing or playing around. A duty had been bestowed upon me, just another Human in their eyes, to bear the power that was locked away inside every one of us. To find what was lost to Earth for so long.
But hey, it's Equestria. Things can only look up from here, right?
... right?
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Hey Everypony!
Before I go on I gotta tell ya: THANK YOU for reading this.
I am 15 years old and a big fan of the show. I have no experience freely writing like this whatsoever, I have no knowledge of literary devices or methods of writing. I wrote this for the pure enjoyment of it!
Most of the stuff you see above was written spontaneously. Apart from the main plot which I just thought over for about a day.
I am definitely going to continue this writing. Even if not many people read it, I enjoyed the experience nonetheless!
Well now that it's 5 in the morning for me and it's way past my bed time, I'm gonna sign off now and head to bed!
Again, thanks for putting up your time with this! It may not be the best thing you've read, but I tried. Maybe with a little more experience...?
However, any form of opinion and criticism is appreciated!
Thanks again! Bye!
And Merry Christmas,
Artemis Orion
This looks good.
Bookmarked.
Don't fail me, son.
I hate the done to death consent of a 15-20 year old male broney ho hates his life, is antisocial,l have no friends, gets bullied in school etc...
I just think its done to death and i hate it, its not as much "the is antisocial,l have no friends" part i dislike but its the brony part, if the character is a "brony" then your implying that he will know stuff about all the pony character´s like there names personalty and there earlier life before he meats them and talks to them, and its just that forth wall braking i relay hate, it can be okay if the human character keeps this to his oven thoughts but as sone as he starts blabbing about it and starts "seeing the future" the story is a good as lost.
i think it destroys almost every human crossover fanfic i read, only very few writers that use it in a very subtle way have made it work in my opinion but in most cases it simply put destroys the story.
Even as i saw all of this coming from the description i desisted to read it any way, being only ca 2500 words an all, and besides if this fan dome have learned me anything its not to judge anything before you read or see it, and to my surprise it wasn't that bad. you handle the "depressed" character in a good way and no major forth wall braking scene to fuck up the story.
so to my own surprise i will be tracking this, i hope you handle the "brony" subject in a good way and don´t make any big forth wall braking moments.
great fanfic man! can't wait for part 2
Very cool! You know i have 2 fictions, but i plan to wait till there finished till i post even a chapter for special reasons... and this chapter i really liked it!
One more story to at to my collection of... nearly 100 chapters..left to read...
I'll be tracking this story, it most certainly has potential. If you want a piece of friendly advice, I'd reccomend checking out tvtropes.org, it has a lot of really useful information on the subject of of being entertaining.
hmmmm....
you got my attention
>> Luna Fan Thanks for letting me know! And don't worry, if the fourth wall ever breaks in this story (and it will. ALOT.) I will provide a good scientific, and somewhat magical reason for it. (Science Of Magic anyone?)
Honestly, I wasn't aiming for the character to be antisocial, bullied or had no friends. This character was (loosely) based off of me, or maybe to a better understanding, a Twilight Sparkle.
I understand the way I write may not always be so interesting. But I always liked to see things in details, trying to picture it in my mind, and then write it out.
I may not have presented the story to its full potential, but hey, you live and learn! The basic storyline was just stuck in my head for a while, curious to see what would happen if these worlds collide. It lead me to writing this, and I have quite a few things planned for it.
But until then, you can only wait.
Thanks again for reading
Hello again everyone!
Had a bit of fun developing this chapter. It certainly leads to a lot of possibilities the way i see it.
Here's the second chapter! It maybe shorter than the Prologue, but then again, the prologue was not really planned to be that long anyway.
Im progessing this story slowly, hopefully it won't bore you guys too much. There are many more chapters to come, I promise you!
This was a rather short chapter, but I felt leaving it at where it was seemed like a good cliffhanger for you guys.
So our character finally meets the Mane 6! Where can such a mishap go from here?
When I looked at this story again, I saw two ways of going around it from here.
1. Reveal the character to ponies immediately.
2. Stealthily follow them, never revealing the character to the ponies whatsoever through the story.
I chose the first path, because I saw it as more of a challenge to make the world's collide, rather than viewing it from afar.
Hope you stick around to enjoy it!
Have a good day,
Artemis Orion
PS. I claim nothing accept the story itself. Everything that is named officially in the story belongs to their rightful companies and whatnot. I have no pre-readers and no everything you see here was posted just after I typed it out. Whether this is a good or bad decision, idk.
Still open to criticism and opinions y'all! Its a learning experience after all!
I NEED MOAR!!!
NOW!
please...
So this is your first fic?! It definitively doesn't show that much
This is damn near...pro! 
Keep 'em coming!
-Glassed
Uuuh, the second option sounded fun, but I see why you chose the first. If you HAD chosen the first, then you should have taken a look at "On a Cross and Arrow", as it has a good way of doing it. Still this is getting good, and you definitively got my tracking
-Glassed
So far, I like where this is going, and with what I've done with the character. (My name is Keith btw)
Things aren't always as bad as they seem aren't it? hehe...
oh and I hope you found the little 'My Little Dashie' reference and subplot in this chapter! I found it went coincidentally well with what I actually had in mind, so I put it in just for the fun of it! Who knows? Maybe something will come of it later...?
I'm really having fun doing this! And the support you guys have shown so far is really encouraging! And I'm just barely getting started!
All in all, I think it has turned out well, I mean who wouldn't want a Royal Alicorn as a friend?
But I'm going to have to put a little more thought into where I might go with this next. What could we do in Canterlot? hmmm...?
Open to any Criticisms and Opinions ya'll! Thanks for everything,
Artemis Orion
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good to know, if explained well forth wall braking can be relay fun reading about so good to here.
I who'd just be fail it if the human characters (whit you haven't named yet, you relay shod name him in next chapter) exploration to why he knows stuff was something in style whit, hey i know all this stuff about you because i use to watch you on this box every Saturday night, creepy...
that said the 2th chapter was okay, a bit short tho but that only means that #3 is coming out faster i who'd hope
LOL speaking of coming out faster the second i posted the comment above and the page updated the next chapter was out,
I instantly spotted the My Little Dashie reference.
Good job mate!
Also for the push; well of course Twillights friends would have come with her to Canterlot, to keep "the mysterious being at bay". You could use the next chapter for introductions?
Really like where this is going, can't wait to see more of it and... I do believe I'm on fire...
-Glassed
good story relay like it, even is i saw that howl kick in the face interested part coming, good writing plot etc.
so overall job well done. thees just one think i don't relay get, i thought pony's where supposed to be rather small ca 4-5 feet not almost the size of a full grown horse, but now when i think of it you never gave a high to Keith so that relay make this litel rant a rather worthless point
Did I tell you about the time my buddy Keith tried to make fireworks? Third-degree burns all over his body!
Are you planning on including the man from My Little Dashie in this story? Or in your story does Rainbow Dash even remember him?
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The My Little Dashie reference in this chapter can be seen as merely just that; a small reference.
But if this story survives long enough, I may write something about it, only not as sad.
With the original writer's permission of course.
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Now that was a funny story! But ah gotta tell ya'll 'bout the time he told us he travelled to an alternate dimension! An' he says it was filled with PONIES! Man can you believe that guy?!
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And yes, I'm not that tall. I'm 5 feet 6" So i figured they would be around my shoulder.
But even if they weren't... I mean c'mon, It's a alternate dimension! Would you expect it to be the same to Earth's? At least Similar?
However, I will take the physical height of ponies into consideration, because I'm going to have to find a way for my character to get onto Rainbow Dash's back soon. (SPOILERS!)
Good evening everyone! (Well, evening to me anyway.)
As you can see, our character has just met the Mane Six, at the same time attempting not to cause a rift in the multiverse.
I figured it would not be best to bring up any alternate universe stuff yet, until all of them become closer friends.
Will Keith ever be able to return home? Does Rainbow Dash really want to kill him? Why are these questions always in triplets?
I really feel that this story is going at a real slow pace. But I always thought of it as a book to start with. Expect chapters in the double digits!
If you're enjoying this, stick around for the rest! Like I've said countless times, It's a learning experience, so all criticism and opinions are accepted with love and tolerance!
Until the next Chapter!
Artemis Orion
PS. Would anyone like to help me out with some cover art? I know absolutely nothing about drawing, and I can't use the Harmony Pendant as a cover forever. Full credit will be given to thee, not to mention all my bits and internetz! It would be really great if it came from the community. KTHNXBAI
This is awesome!
Keep up the good work. I'm looking forward to more chapters.
"Girls look! Their lowering the bridge!" needs to be "They're"
great story, BTW.
THIS IS PONYRIFFIC!
So far so good! Maybe a bit predictable but still much better than most HiE stories I've read. Keep it up! MOAR!!!
Seems to be going well so far. Nothing calamitous, nothing too bizarre (once you get past the whole pastel ponies bit) Need to work on the spelling/editing homonyms though. 'dawning' -> 'donning' 'hear' -> 'here'
I really shouldn't read so many HiE stories.. bad for my digestion I'm sure. Too many sweets is supposed to rot your teeth, right?
Hard to tell just where this is going to move. Is there a plot, or just an imagination exercise?
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Noted, thanks.
This story actually stared out as an imagination exercise. (le the first chapter)
But after i realized how much this fandom appreciated and supported what i was doing, i decided to make it a story with a better plot.
So hopefully u guys find interesting. And don't worry, this story will be going somewhere! Trust in my plan.
2 things i dont like
1 . his technology is gone, now he cant brag about his race being awesome!
2. ponies are 3.5 ft tall, according to the show. i dont like it when ponies are huge
I think I may have made a few loopholes somewhere, but it was really fun coming up with the plot!
Now I know what a lot of you might be thinking.
OMG why is the bible mentioned here?! It's highly unethical, not to mention, overly bizarre. Maybe even offensive.
Well I'm just gonna say that I'm a Christian. I believe in God and everything in the Bible. But nobody said anything about stuff that WASN'T in the bible.
So I thought I might add a little more complex thinking into this. Trust me, this experiment isn't over yet! Until the next chapter that is.
As for technology, remember how Trotter said something about a catalyst required? Keep it in mind.
Till next chapter!
Artemis Orion
94347 nope the bible makes this a lot easier to understand funnily enough.Nice story I just read it gotta admit it's good
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Wow, thanks! But looking back at this Chapter, I feel like I could have done it better. When I reread it, I felt it went off topic and too long here and there.
Honestly thinking about rewriting this one.
yay Christianity, but unfortuneately i don't read my bible
i really should considering how much time i have in a day
Hey all!
So after six chapters, our good ol' character is finally is going to Ponyville!
Half of this chapter was used to continue explaining the science of the medallion, and the link with humans. We now know of two forms of Primary power: Magic, and Aura (which are supposed to be 2 different things, but I don't think I made it clear enough.) There is one more that completes the triangle. Can you guess what it is?
Anyway, off to sleep! It's my birthday today and I plan to celebrate in the morning!
Happy Holidays ya'll! Enjoy it while it lasts!
Artemis Orion
well... happy birthday : D
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Cool story bro.
My Little Dashie reference FTW.
So does that mean 1 day in Equestria=1 year on Earth?
Soooo... There is no God in Equestria... Ponies don't have souls and afterlife?
95590 I stated that Noah said : "Every decision made by one, cannot be ammended by another."
What I was trying to say with this line was that the ponies had received a whole new world of their own to be God in. Not the god of christianity. It meant that if they did something wrong, they alone would face the consequences. God couldn't help them there, or fix anything or change anything. At least that was what I was trying to put across. I hope it isn't too far-fetched.
So whether or not the first Unicorn and Pegasi created heaven is still up in the air. For now.
random but it works
So if anyone is interested in pre-reading or doing cover art, PM me please.
KTHNXBAI :D
i got the mld reference immediately
And i am sudenly glad i gave this a shot.
Eeyupity yup! A party!
This story has gone from excitement, to serious, and now, fun!! Expect craziness, and a little revelation, in the next chapter!
You guys probably got the Lyra reference, but can you find Derpy's? It's pretty obvious
I'm breaking the fourth wall really slowly, but so far, it's not falling apart. *Phew*
But now I would like a little help from you guys.
First off, I NEED a Pre-reader! Everything written so far is checked by me,myself and I. But I need someone to help me, in case I miss out anything, or cause major loopholes.
Secondly, but less importantly, I'm still looking for a cover artist.
Thirdly, give all the criticism and opinions you can care to give to a 15 year old Brony who's first and only story has already received so much support!
Thanks guys! It's nice to know people read the expressions of my imagination!
Artemis Orion
Moar.
Don't like it ... I feel like I want to send a hydrogen bomb right up their arse :'' Fire mission fire mission , sign is almighty , cords are as punched let's show these fuckers what happens when you mess with man kind ''
97020 oi braw at least give him some powers I mean cmon , from what ya made out the descendants of Noah should have powers stronger than the princesses , awaiting next chapter dasvidania !
lucky son of a bitch
scratch that lucky basterd got two of them