I recommend you change the rating for this final chapter. Just saying.

2103678 Fail Changed it now...thanks

2103815 It's changed now What did you think?

This is one pairing I would like to see more of.

A truly better ending than the previous one. Finally, Spike got lucky indeed that night. :D

Thanks for such a great tale...both figuratively and literally.

2103998 Why, thank you! Not many readers thank the editors (we don't care so much, at least I don't), so thanks. Like Inferno said, the clop was new to me, so I did my best.

Great work you two, little too much use of the words "he" and "she" in the beginning of the sex scene, but other then that, very hot chapter and a much more rewarding end.
Again, great work Inferno demon Dash and Miss Dark Angel.

2105721 Thank you bro, that means a lot to me, I'm sure it does to Miss Dark as well I'll admit I have much trouble repeating words but I can't spell new words so I keep repeating

This is an amazing fic i really love the first part it was more emotion than anything and the second part was really good too

Congratulations you made something awesome

Ill put this as simple as I can...........................awesome! every part was awesome!, well except the fight scene dont know why but I didnt felt all that emotion in it, everything else was pure awesome!

Oh, yeah, baby. Vinillllllllllllllllllllllllllllll Scratch!

My friend. The first time I look you up in a while and you have this awesome fic. Loved every second of it

2812106 Thank you brother, that honestly means a lot to me

2812113 you are welcome. You deserve it. Hey, I'm writing a new fanfic. When I get the chapters I have on my computer you wanna read em? I got 7 so far

I applaud this: Clap, clap, clap, clap, clap, clap, clap, clop, clap!

2814284 Hell yeah bro, you know I got your back

3011509 Thank you, that means a lot to me my friend

3011843 i liked this story!! it was awesome

good story, my only two criticisms with this one is the use of the word "buck" instead of "fuck" and the emphasis on smoking..... and this is coming from a light smoker (hookah and a vape pen count as light). There is too much emphasis on smoking, the color of the smoke, which orifice its being exhaled out of, etc... alot of rather pointless info here.

not like it matters much, i still liked the story.

you needed something with sweetie getting her comeuppance, rarity tearing into her or something.

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I like Sweetie so I went easy on her.

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doesn't really change the fact her reasoning is more then somewhat flawed.

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Maybe but it's an old story and I don't really care to change it.