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Inferno demon Dash
Showing you the darker, more realistic side of MLP in my writing. Smoking, swearing and being a bastard, but that's nothing new with me. Got a cigarette?
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Badass Spike is Badass.
Great read, it was dark enough and I especially liked how you sent Spike over the edge! Still, we will need explanation in future chapters for his sudden strenght grow, but I'm sure you have it all planned out!. I really can't wait for more, because this story is going to be really interesting!
Another awesome spilight? HELL YEH
Yet another action filled Twike story. Wouldn't be Deamon otherwise.
Story setup is awesome and its always good to see Spike get buff under the influence of super love sterioids.
An inferno daemon dash story that doesn't have main character death!! Proofread and authored by two of my bestfriends... Buck yeah I read the living shit out this!!
Not back Monsieur, action, romance, feels. Not bad at all. I cringed a little with all the fighting. Seeing how the blood would spray, the gaping hole in Sombra, poor Fluttershy, Rainbow Dash, Applejack, those were painful moments indeed.
One of the best hero kills villion fanfics I ever read
3501091I think it might have something to do with the Crystal Heart. Maybe it felt the love Spike has for Twilight and helped him give him the boost he needed.
You know, I did a story just recently that looks similar to this story.
3501797 True...maybe Spike took a bite of it...after all he eats gems
Why only mature gore and not mature gore and sex? We have a disturbing lack of badass Twispike clop.
3502708 My co author and I chose not to add sex, only lime, sorry
But yes, Spike is a beast in this, chapter two soon to be posted
3502678 His greed for Twi helped aid his transformation
Spike knows such BAD- ASSERY!!!!!
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Well that's what happens when you buck with a dragons mate
Poor Dashie and Shy
Not to mention Spike. I'm sure he's up to the challenge though.
THE fellings! DASH!
SHY! 
Still I love it.....
By the way you hate Shining guy too? How come?
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wtf
He is kind of a jack-ass. I mean come on; who doesn't at least listen to their own sister when they try to warn them about something. He should have at least thought to look in to the situation when Twilight said something was wrong with 'Cadence' at the wedding. She's Twilight's favorite pony besides Celestia for crying out loud. I can understand the rest of the mane 6 but Shining should have known something was wrong. Sooooo... yeah, he's a jack-ass.
3507154 Welcome to Tartarus, here is a map and your guide.
Enjoy.
3506662 He is a jackass, how do you NOT tell your little sister your getting married? To your old foalsitter, plus he never believed Twilight when she told him of Chrysails, also I could honesty see him and Spike not getting along. Because I personally don't like Shining Armor, Spike hates him, good enough for me and yes poor Dash and Shy but I seriously did not wish to have her ego in the story and though I could have used Shy, her injuries just did not let her live
Finally found some time to read it... and honestly I don't remember the time when I was so amazed by a story.
The masterful usage of character's emotions and inner thoughts really added depth to this chapter, especially during the scene with Celestia. Most of all, I like how you offed certain characters, this was an unexpected twist because writers rarely kill ponies from mane 6 this early in their stories. Hope to see the chapter 3 soon with as much quality as this one has!
3508247 Now that you said it........ And Twi calls Shining her first friend.....
Poor Spike....t1.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcTn1mmtac7MlARCWIMeH0dGFdLQRGl-qD6ITcg1ChPK8jTpDZqr
Found time to read it and those are my thoughts:
I really can't wait for another chapter, this story really got me invested. keep up the good, hard and honest work or the crystal phalanx will come and get both of you!
And I demand more DERPY! 
Good chapter. I liked how Spike took on the mantle of the Crystal Savior not because he felt obligated or guilty, but because he genuinely cares what happens to the crystal ponies.
Can't wait for more.
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Now, this was one, long chapter to read. I liked the time skip, helped to make it more dynamic, liked how you included a lot of characters from the show and gave them some meaningful roles
The part of year 18 made me laugh out loud. Liked the fight scene, glad to see that Spike is becoming more and more badass. Absolutely loved Chryssalis, one of my fav characters actually but there was a little lack of something: Changelings would make the excellent spies so I was surprised that the crystal empire didn't send out any of them so spy on other nations 
I really like the way you've written the dialogue. Its like I'm watching a cut-scene from God of War. And with the headcanon you've set up for most of your stories, thats the feel I get from it. The rivalry between Shining and Spike kind of surprised me. Uber Big Bro Shining Armor vs Knight Commander Spike.
Wow, thats some words I never thought I'd hear together.
I too am liking the way this is progressing. I'm intrigued about the animosity between Spike and Shining. I'm sure there's an interesting back story to that. This chapter had a nice flow to it and the fight scene, though short, really showed just how much of a badass Spike has become. I have to say though that I find myself in agreement with death. Gods truly are irksome beings. Other than that... ROCK ON.
This is just EPIC! Why wonder why Hasbro haven't hired.............
I can think of two gods spike could kill for immortality.
3605877 Go on?
3762413 The diamond dog god and mabe chrysalis
3762505 I favor if Spike kills the doggy God but it was already told that they are in good terms with the Changelings.....
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Thought it might not be easy...
Wow this is the longest chapter you made so far....
You seem unsatisfied on your creation but it's you who created them!
HA! 
Fail! 
AND IT"s BUCKING AWESOME!!!! Fate huh?
Anyhow that what's makes us mortal unique we are not made to be perfect but we keep on trying to became only to fail just to try again better and stronger than before....
Rarity Died huh? Oh well, glad Applejack is Alive. She still has one eye left at least.
Very good story. I don't really hate Shining Armor that much, but I do see him as forgetful and slightly dumb. But in this story, he deserved worse than what he got honestly.
10 out of 10 for Romance
10 out of 10 for Dark
10 out of 10 for Alternate Universe
9 out of 10 for grammar
10 out of 10 for overall story.
A like and a Fave for this story. Good job! Have a moustache.
3780977 I have to agree that shining got off easy.
All in all I loved the story. Great referance too 300 with Spike's speach. We dine in Tartarus indeed.
Oh and just to ask, is there a sequel coming out for this?
3794961 No, this is all there is, I'm sorry
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Okay. I'll just make up my own endings for everypony then in my mind.
One of the best fimfictions I have ever read!!!!!
THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST SPIKE STORIES I HAVE EVER READ!!!! A must read by far. I would love to see some more of his battles and growth but even if we don't this is a great story that is all I can say.
Must say that this did not catch my eye at first, but after reading the second chapter, I became fantasized with this. The work of the OCs and the plot of this story bewildered me in my most favourited way. Amazement. To sum all of this up, this is one of the best stories I have ever read.
Poor Sombra, Spike gets a level up half way through. Level up is a bit OP might want to consider scaling it better.
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Bammit I hate character deaths! Usually at this point I'd stop reading, but your story is too damn good.
Why you not like Shining Armor?
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Corn dogs and Star Wars references he's awesome. At least he ain't Flash Sentry.
Believe it! Couldn't help myself
Uh, a warrior, duh. Even so, you seem to be feeling remorse, regardless of what you say. Your thoughts betray you.
I definitely get a Greek myth vibe here. Though the twenty year preparation could be expanded into stories all their own, also if the red moon crystals can inflict harm on the god figures then how are they immortal?
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They Can't, Spike was given the power to harm a God, so the Gems became his weapon, allowing them to kill Gemini. Also, the Gods are not untouchable, they can be hit, but only another God or one blessed with a God's blessing such as Twilight did with the Elements.
I LOVE IT
BAD ASS SPIKE ALL THE WAY
Interesting story ;but I can't help but think if I was in Spike's place I would pissed
I mean I get Spike stopped Sombra ,but that doesn't mean that the Crystal ponies have any right to expect him to use his life to protect them
Espeacily if its just cause some stupid title the've forced on him