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Inferno demon Dash
Showing you the darker, more realistic side of MLP in my writing. Smoking, swearing and being a bastard, but that's nothing new with me. Got a cigarette?
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Oh no...
Instead of killing him off as a character, or giving him Rarity as his master, you did something horrible... You gave him Sweetie Belle, you bastard!
But it's okay, the story is nice.
..........A #63 Sparkle story!? With Sweetie as the mare friend!?... Definitely intrigued!
After reading a couple of your fics I gotta ask, did 'Diseased Stallion's' sponsor you or something? Cuz I've seen em' in yer stories a lot.
2066393
I honestly been waiting for someone to ask me that. You see I chose to create those types of smokes when I read a fic that had smoking in it, but not it's own type of Equestrian brand, so after thinking for a while, I chose this name and noticed that I really liked it.
Anyone is welcomed to use it if they want their creatures to smoke in it, if you're wondeing why I do it, it's because I like to bring a very real sense of life to Equestria, you know, smoking, drinking, sex that sort of stuff, as you can tell.
Would I ever make a sunshine and rainbow fic like many other people are able to do? Ummmmm......no. I, I could not do it, it's just not me, you know?
I'm sorry, what was your question?
CHALLENGE ACCEPTED
Could have Sb been more of a female dog?
2066704 Great question, let's ask Winona.
IDD: Winona, can Sweetie Belle be any more of a bitch?
Winona: Woof, woof!
IDD: That's a no, my friend
2066752 Karlos: Good dog.
My inner Twilight is speaking again. 
Another definition for the word ''Bitch'', would mean female dog.
2066874
For inner Twilight, it just means you're wise
I never did care for Rarity or Sweetie Bell. I do like your Spike though I think the standard portrale of him as a wussy dragon is just people afraid to show him grow as a dragon.
Even love can fade.................................
But that doesn't mean it can't be rekindled!
2067376 I couldn't agree more. This is why I love this so much; writers either make him a completely useless character, don't bring him in at all, or just make him annoying as hell. There are some exceptions, though, like this one. People are just afraid to go the extra mile and see that this is a possible side of Spike when he gets older.
2066588 I will read this story.
2067376 Personally, I despise Rarity, she is such a bitch. Though I do love Sweetie Belle, my favorite of the CMC. I'm very glad you liked this though
And I agree, I think Spike as he is older makes much more sense and is fun to write, but even in the show I still think he is twelve
2067421 Very true.
2067465 I honestly never really thought much of that, to tell the truth I don't think I read a fic as him when he is older for a long time, you know how sad that is? Do people not know that they can make them older?
And why is it so hard for people to see their favorite creature drink, smoke, swear etc?
2067593 Well then thank you
And I hope you enjoy it.
2067821 I hear you, I was honestly thinking of add the sex but not sure if I want to or not, thoughts?
2068047 I think I've seen one, but never really read any. People don't usually have the things you have in your stories that make it realistic because they're ponies--or ponies and a dragon. Innocent, technicolor creatures who take some bronies away from reality to enjoy the cherubic world of sunshine and rainbows. It's the happiness, the message of friendship they enjoy, since it's not at all like reality. Granted, it has some dark elements, but nothing necessarily like what reality has. So they usually want to keep them that way. This doesn't go for all bronies, but a fair amount of them, at least. So I enjoy stories like yours because you don't care; you like the characters but aren't afraid of bringing them into the real world, with smoking and sex, etc.
So if people dislike this, it's probably because it's a type of story they aren't comfortable with. Oh, well.
Totally gonna give this a read later
2068219 Thanks bro
2068165 I can completely agree with that, I honestly never thought of that, I just thought people would want the creatures to be as realistic as possible. I'm not one for flowers and sunshine, even my more innocent story: Romantic Dance has smoking, drinking and swearing, I don't know what it is but I can't keep the darker sides of life away, you're right though, it is not for everyone, I can respect that
2068473 No problem my friend
WoW! This was a raw fanfic. I feel so bad for both Spike and Sweetie Bell. What i think though is Spike was like that toward Sweetie Bell, because if he couldn't have Rarity, he wanted her sister in a relationship, and would do anything to try and keep her. And also I like how you brought up the Crystal Empire moment in this kind of and how he helped save it. That also had to weigh heavily on him through the years as he was growing. Very good and raw fanfic.
2069437
I'm honestly very glad that you enjoyed it so much, this is not as dark as my other stories: Melting a cold heart, or Suicide Letters (which has to be one of the most darkest fics in the fandom) but it is pretty cruel, I like MLP like that, real. Not flowers, sunshine and rainbows such as in the show (even though it's a kids show) but with serious problems and with certain real things one would do in real life, drinking, smoking, swearing, you know.
I'm honored that you enjoy it so much, and I'm hoping you'll be able to look over my other fics if you have the time
2068165 I definitely agree I am a fan of the show in an innocent way I like how it's fun and cheery and takes my mind of how much I hate work and how I still have another 11 months till I get a day off. I still like stories like this one though because it takes characters I know and love and shows them in a more adult way. Sometimes Dash just needs a drink, or Pinky likes Coke and Twilight needs a good lay or Spike just want a cigarette and to vent. After a long day that is totally relate able. I just don't understand people who despite the description and labels still read stories they disapprove of and then whine at and accuse the author of running everyone's good time and enjoyment.
2069920 Well, I have yet to see a person really whine or complain about what goes on in stories like these, but should I ever come across that, well, I know exactly what to say. I don't know what makes people read these stories when they ought to know what they're dealing with. Eh, some people just don't know when to let shit go.
2069920 People who do that are just very closed minded bastards who ruin the fun of writing and the enjoyment of our favorite series for many other, fresh, hones fans. I may not like somethings such as HIE or poorly written OC's or Spike/Rarity but I would never bash and judge those fans that do.
We all like different things for a reason, we should really learn to respect eachothers likes and dislikes, not hate it to the point of leaving the fandom, we are always going to have someone who dislikes something that we reallly enjoy....for example, I'm a huge Spilight fan, others may have their own options but as long as they respect what I myself enjoy as I do whatever pairing they like then it's all chill, you know?
I'm a very dark writer, I can crack out a tragic or dark humor fic like it was nothing, but give me a chance to write a sunshine and rainbow fic and it would never be completed or even started. We all have things that we are good at, for me thats writing real world views into the MLP universe, not for everyone but those that do enjoy it then they are welcome to read and review.
I having nothing against cheeful, fun, normal fics, I like them to...I just can't write them to save my life
What are your thoughts on this bro?
2069950 It wasn't this site but when I read Raritys generous plan, and when I first read Cupcakes the comments sections where a complete war zone. Some of the stuff I've seen here has been more sedate but your right about letting things go.
2069972 Hmmm Guess its part of that whole Love and Understanding part, and my personal avoidance of HIE. I guess it's all about finding the authors and stories that kinda match your personal view of how Equestria should be.
I don't usually read the sad, dark, or gore stories because I do like the whole AppleDash and DerpLight slice of life stories because they are fun and keep my mind off work. Sometimes though I gotta take a peak into the dark side where I am really picky about what I do and do not like.
I wish I could write the light hearted stuff too but the dark stuff just comes to readily for me.
2070320 Ah.....I hear you.....hmmmm....I'll think about it.
Well, that was different...., and I liked it, good work!
To bad Spike had to fall asleep, that would have been a wild night. Well there hangover is going to be a bitch!
2094337 I know it's different but I just can't do rainbows and sunshine like so many other people, it's not me you know? Anyway, I'm tempted to do another chapter with them having their fun but my best author friend and editor for this story is not one for clop
Thoughts?
Well you can leave it teen and just put in the idea of sex without really going into detail about act. I know, I know, it maybe bittersweet for some, but at least they will know that Spike still had a goodnight 'mixing' with Vinyl.
2095558 Huh....I honestly never thought of that, great idea bro
2095616Happy to help.
2094445 Hey, dude, I've decided after a bit of thinking. And if you ever want to add clop to this with another chapter, I'll still do edit it. I know you want to put it in your story real bad, and I shouldn't let my silly shyness about the subject get in the way (and long story short, I got in a fight with my friend about this same thing; she thought it was stupid how I'm so shy about it. Not like I can help it, though, it's just how I am), but anyway, I'm all for letting you add clop and I'll still edit. I shouldn't let that get in the way.
2099635 Are you postive, Dark? You're my best friend on this site, I really don't want to write something that will make you squrim or regret your choice, you really don't have to if you don't want.....but I thank you very much for your honest option...how did that fight even start?
2095651 Well I'm glad to have an honest friend like you help me
2099737 Absolutely. I really don't mind. For a great friend, I took my time considering it and thought "What's the harm in it?" Besides, it's not like I'm writing it. Just going through it for any problems. Seriously and entirely, I am certain it's fine. Pinkie Swear.
It wasn't so much of a fight, but her joking about it constantly until I told her to piss off, which I never ever do. I'm the friend in our group who if I'm mad at you, you know you fucked up. She was making a sex joke at lunch (because our lunch chats are quite sophisticated
), and I blushed and it pretty much went to hell from there. I stopped talking to her since because she's the kind of friend that never knows when to leave well enough alone, and overall, she just hasn't been a good friend recently, especially since she's been all over her BF. Ah, I shouldn't get too much into this, though. Point is, I'm all for it. I have thought a lot about it, so my mind cannot be made up. If you want to write clop and have me edit it, do not hesitate to ask.
2099737Thanks, but not much help was needed from me, you already had the idea in your head, I just added my 2 bits
,lol.
And now that Miss Dark Angel is on-board with the idea, I say you got all the help you need.
Looking forward to the update!
On other note, not to get to much into you and Miss Dark's conversation but, Miss Dark, if your the kind of person I think you are then, she will come to miss you soon and say she's sorry. Good luck all the same and I hope she doesn't take to long, later.
2099800 Very well, if you honestly sure about it I'll get started on it, right after I have a smoke
Though do PM if you wish about this friend of your's I wish to know as much as I can and help out my author friends when ever they wish, seriously though, thank you very, very much. You're a genuis, Dark...does think mean you like clop or that you'll just edit it?
2100178 True that though you helped out a lot, only hoping that I write it well, it's going to be titled "Sleeping like a bastard" so I'll get started on it now that I had my smoke
And more then enough, she's a bucking genuis, she going to be as famous as Bronystories or MallaJong1 if she keeps up this shit
No lie.
And awesome, I hope you'll like it.
2100201 Just edit, really. I haven't quite read any yet. Maybe soon. That isn't to say I haven't read stories with sex in them ever. Just not with ponies.
2100178 My gosh, that's very kind of you to say, mostly because we don't really know each other. I just hope someday, she'll realize she takes her friends for granted and be with us more often. Thank you.
2100348 I heard that, I won't lie, it's a bit strange but you get used to it if it's what your into, none could say but you
though
I recommend you change the rating for this final chapter. Just saying.
2103678 Fail
Changed it now...thanks
2103815 It's changed now
What did you think?
This is one pairing I would like to see more of.
A truly better ending than the previous one. Finally, Spike got lucky indeed that night. :D
Thanks for such a great tale...both figuratively and literally.
2103998 Why, thank you! Not many readers thank the editors (we don't care so much, at least I don't), so thanks.
Like Inferno said, the clop was new to me, so I did my best. 
Great work you two, little too much use of the words "he" and "she" in the beginning of the sex scene, but other then that, very hot chapter and a much more rewarding end.
Again, great work Inferno demon Dash and Miss Dark Angel.
2105721 Thank you bro, that means a lot to me, I'm sure it does to Miss Dark as well
I'll admit I have much trouble repeating words but I can't spell new words so I keep repeating
This is an amazing fic i really love the first part it was more emotion than anything and the second part was really good too
Congratulations you made something awesome
Ill put this as simple as I can...........................awesome! every part was awesome!, well except the fight scene dont know why but I didnt felt all that emotion in it, everything else was pure awesome!
Oh, yeah, baby. Vinillllllllllllllllllllllllllllll Scratch!