Derpy Hooves is a mare with a dark past, as such she has never allowed any pony, save her sister Dinky
Doo to bond with her.
But what is she to do when a shivering, left with nowhere else to go Doctor Whooves appears at her doorstep?
She has allowed him to stay with her and her sister for four days during a harsh, bad downpour in Ponyville. But her heart and words are colder then any rain and makes the Doctor very wary towards her, can he help her find love...would it be worth it in the end to even try?
For the legendary author friend of mine enigmaMystere, happy late birthday you crazy bastard!
Special thanks to the semi-legendary author Miss Dark Angel for her amazing editing skills, her writing destroys my own so be sure to look over her work when able to help her out. Thanks, Dark.
Look for errors and inform me of such if you please will, thank you friends
this gets an insta fav from me!
One word
I'll get to reading it soon, for now it's in another tab for later
1786166 How the buck did you do that? It just got posted a second ago,
Thanks brother, seriously...hope you like it.
1786178 im a wizard, thats how i did it. but i know i will like it.
Damn, that's a small cover pic.
1786177 Had a feeling it was, thank you brother
1786190 Crazy brother, you know that?
1786200 True that
hope you like the story brother.
1786211 yes. and also by state standards.
i don't normally read dark fics...but this...
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*fav's*
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1786225 Good point
1786257 And I'm glad you like it brother, if you can tell me what you do and do not like or what can be changed, you know...be detailed for the sake of the story
1786272 bu state standards i am actually insane. mut i keep it in check
1786290 Just barely
So have you read the story yet bro?
1786295 not yet. i am in the middle of reading...
1786519 Shall wait
1786585 i shall get to it though
I will be keeping my eye on this. Interested to see how this develops. Have a thumb up.
1786592 I believe you bro.
1786598 By the GODS! Thank you, thank you so much, honestly did not expect you to review
Rule 1: Don't eat her muffins.
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1786735 Good point, and the second rule?
1786773
Not sure yet, give me time to come up wit more.
1786809 Will do
Next chapter should be up by tomorrow, why the buck am I still awake?
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I'm about to go to sleep too (dat y I don't have more rules) hopefully have some rules b4 u post next chapter.
Wow this is interesting, and I take it this is the mlp cannon Dr. Whooves aka Time Turner, not Timelord Whooves right?
It was a good read can't wait to see more!
Ugh, cliffhangers!
1786878 I have no clue who your talking about but sure
1787392 Your welcome
1788183What I mean is Dr. Whooves from the My little pony. Not Dr. Who?
1788471 Ah, I hear yeah. Yes I think he is Doctor Whooves
Derpy smokes? She drinks? Sounds like my kind of mare. This is definitely a new take on her and I'm finding this quite enjoyable. Keep going. The doctor has his work cut out for him.
i love any good doctor whooves story, anyone know any other doctor whooves stories on here? i like this one
It seems that Derpy is kinda OOC in this fic. I mean, I know you have made her a whole "hardened and gruff" sort of character, with a background to support, but I'm sure that a lot of us are going to have trouble relating to this.
1791352 The thing about Derpy, Doctor Whooves and many other back ground ponies is the fact that they have no back ground, so given the fact that they have no true background, an author can make the creature anyway they wish though I will agree with the fact that Derpy is a bit OOC in this story and though I am sorry for that, it's how she's going to be for this story, I like her liike this personally, she's nota pushover and can stand up to those who tease her for her eyes or such, yoyu know, but hey, to each their own.
Well I think he's making progress.
But really this is an interesting take on Derpy and I do like it kinda. The story itself very interesting still can't see how the Doc will fix this, which is good keep them wondering.
Don't get in Derpy's business or she will fuck you up
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1792407 RULE TWO!!!
Now what's rule three?
Don't stare at her eyes.
1792676 Very impressive
This is both hilarious and depressing. Didn't even know that was a combination for stories, let alone with Derpy in it.
1796376 Well, I'm very glad I can appeal to your sense of humor, I'll admit is it a bit to dark, but it's supposed to be, Derpy is my 100% favorite pony in all of MLP and even though it's a new change to how many put her, I like the new change she has. She takes no bullshit from anyone and never alllows anyone to just tease or be rude to her, as oppses to the Derpy that is very sad by the one ever creature just runs over her as if she's stupid, you'll learn more as the story goes on.
I'm writing chapter three now and show a darker side to Derpy Hooves that none will ever imange, weather anyone likes it or not
For some odd reason, I'm really loving Derpy in this. Now I require sexy times
I approve. good job on this to bad there is 1 chapter left make it count!!!
1806653
Not clop though maybe, might have to ask Eni first.
1806795 Might add an extra chapter because I'm still not near the romance yet
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Hum I like this is vary good news, keep it up and I might fallow you.
1807068 Thanks
Hmmmm.....
Interesting way of portraying Derpy there. Much more different than the Fandom version of her. It's refreshing to say the least.
The chapter was a little short for me tho. But it did its' job of telling the reader what is going on clearly enough. Still this story is most likely to be ignored by hardcore Derpy fans.
Other than that, it is a daring concept to take and is interesting to read.
Now going on to read more.
1808477 Well the good part is that your honest, and you may be right, it might not catch the eyes of hard core Derpy fans (hope I'm one of them
) but hey, to each their own, thank you for your review, it made my night.....or morning.....I should have been in bed three hours ago, BUCK! 
i'm glad you enjoy it, you'll notice that in every single one of my stories from this until I write more that Derpy Hooves will play a part in every one, minor or major 
She is my favorite pony in all of Equestria after all
Hope you like the story as it goes on...persoanlly, I like this new, darker view of Derpy, as said before she's a no bullshit mare and even though she may be cruel or a bit harsh, at least she does not sugar coat her words or tries to be somepony different, that's not to say she'll be like this in all of my stories but in this one....she's here to stay.
The Doctor is a boss for keeping his cool with Derpy for three days even when she threatens to murder him.
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The Doctor is a boss and straight up pimp.
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1812950 She is indeed, no words have ever been more true
And agreed, the Doctor is very much a boss in this story
She is indeed what?