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Prequel to Lost. (Some chapters are set in the present and others in the past)

It’s been two years since Fluttershy became Lost in the Everfree forest and was rescued by the human mage Grendel, curious to know more about humans beyond what Fluttershy told her. Twilight Sparkle decides to visit the Royal Archives in Canterlot but each trips goes without success. On one of her visits however, she is shown by the Royal Archives Scribe, Quill Pen, a secret room that contains an old tome. As she reads it she discovers that not only have there been humans in Equestria before, but what she and every pony knew about the rise and fall of King Sombra…

...Was wrong

(Cover art done by me.)
(Thank you to Cirrus_Brony for his editing.)

Chapters (14)
Comments ( 72 )

This is going to be good.

looks good. Ancient wars and necromancy, nice.:pinkiesmile:

Wait, hold on a minute. I thought Varlo was the god of magic?
Is dark magic that much different then regular magic to have it's own god? :rainbowhuh:

2114127 I think it'd make scence, their's got to be balance to everything, Perhaps dark magic refers to the Dark Intentions, which Light magic would refuse to preform.

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All will be revealed soon, but what I will say is both Varlos and J'skaar are Gods of Magic. :pinkiesmile:
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Your sort of right, like I said I will reveal later on in chapters why J'skaar is also a God of Magic :rainbowwild:

I'm kinda annoyed by the obviously evil mages name.
It sounds too much like Malzahar.

Sure he's most likely supposed to be a carbon copy of him but the name just sounds... cheap and made up in 10 seconds.

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Honestly, I've just looked up who Malzahar is and I didn't know he was from LOL due to me never playing it:twilightblush:. And I can see what you mean by the names being really similar, Malaskaar was a villain from my old Dungeons and Dragons quest back when I used to play it a lot as a teenager. His name was a combination of Malicious due to his personality and Skaar because of his deity; I added the extra ‘a’ after Mal because it sounded a lot better coming of the tongue then Malskaar did.

So sorry if the name does annoy you, I really didn’t know there was a LOL character called Malzahar either. I’ll probably change his name with another villain from my old Dungeons and Dragons characters in the future (If I can find the damn character sheets) I’d like to say thank you for not down voting my story because of that as well.:twilightsmile:

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Oh... well i on the other hand never played D&D so i guess we're even :twilightsheepish:
He just became 100% less annoying for me.

I was sure you just based him off Malzahar because... well frankly everything about him from name to powers just scream Malzahar.

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Ah fair play, honestly didn't know he had powers like that to. Kinda makes me want to play it now to be frank. :pinkiesmile:

Comment posted by Sonlirain deleted Feb 16th, 2013

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He does look pretty sweet and I can see now what you meant by the similarities, hopefully I can clear it up now. His whole shadow manipulation thing is his God favor meaning its a bonus power he is granted by J'skaar but it does take a lot of energy to keep up, the lightning he casts is his base element. In the other story I did, 'Lost', the mage from it uses fire most of the time because thats his bas element, the mages I depict can all use elemental magic but they all have a personal preference they do better at, if that makes sense :twilightsheepish:.

New chapter, awesome!

New cover art it good, but i liked the old one better. Just my opinion though.

THE HUMAN ON THE STORY PICTURE HAS NO EYES. BTW. I'LL READ LATER AND SAY NYES.

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My bad attempt at shade covering any ability to see his eyes. Mah bad. :pinkiesad2:

NEW CHAPTER!:pinkiehappy:
I imagine Malaskaar voice being the same as Karl's from Law of Talos.

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Good lord...I can't get that out of my head now! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

COOL NEW STORY PICTURE. NYES.

“I am the God of Magic…you may call me…Varlos.”

Dun dun duuuuunnnnn

See this? This guys is what I like to call an under appreciated fic! Very good, bravo sir of who I don't know at all! >.> :twilightsmile:

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Heh thanks and oh yeah totally don't know me at all
>.>
<.<
:pinkiehappy:

:yay: finally it has been posted! And it was amazing as well especially ... everything, it was all just AMAZING :pinkiehappy:

p.s. cause i'm like never the first one
FIRST POST!!!

ITS ABOUT TIME TURIL SHOWED UP:flutterrage:

Now that is out of my system.
Great chapter, and released on the same day Double Rainboom is coming out. for that have a stash or two for making my Saturday even more awesome.

:moustache::moustache:

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Glad you enjoyed it :rainbowwild: Hope it also clears up your confusion in the earlier chapters about J'skaar as well :pinkiehappy:

I agree with DVAN56 :derpytongue2: Finally o3 o

Anyways to get to the point.
Not bad, good chapter, keep it up ^^

2345131 what time is it supposed to be posted?

Amazing story so far, can't wait to see Turil's skills in action.

it's things like this that annoy me XD for example, and I know I mentioned this on "Chaotic Love" but Flare Pyros is the Darkness incarnate, and guess what? He is one of good guys, Light is not inherently good nor is Darkness inherently evil. Think Riku from Kingdom Hearts 2 XD... But anyway, good story and I hope you update soon

I'm so sorry for how long it's been since I updated this:twilightblush:. I was working on Chaotic Love as well as Uni work and wasn't able to properly balance everything, however now that I'm nearly done with uni (only a week or so left.) I will be working on Revelations for the majority of the time being. Thank you for being patient and I hope you like the chapter.:twilightsmile:

Gawd, I love that ending :pinkiehappy: Giggling Luna is so cute :rainbowkiss:

YES! ITS BACK! THANK YOU!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:


Now that that is out of my system.
I think I may have to go back and reread this now that its updating again.

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Well buckle up because this is the story I'm going to be focusing on from here until completion :rainbowwild:

Not 100% happy with this but oh well:twilightsheepish:, the story is rounding down now to the last few chapters. the next two chapters are going to be posted together sometime next week or Sunday the 16th (With any luck.) and I will be then working on the sequel to this as well as 'Lost'. :twilightsmile:




Also if any one is interested, Rilly is pronounced 'R-ill-ee'

2682489 shoot i wanted to call First

Edit: lol “Rilly…really?” that made my day

Great chapter, can't wait to see how the battle turns out

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Thank you, it's going to be the longest chapter to date on it, so long it will be split into to sections. After that the story is going to be nearly finished and the sequel will be started I think...either the end of June or beginning of July. Maybe sooner if nothing gets in the way. :twilightsmile:

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